Crushed - Comments

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This was heart-wrenching to read. I legit cried. I am in awe of the emotion that I pulled from this because it hits terribly close to home. It's so beautiful and it flows so smoothly but I just can't stress enough how sad it is. The layout fits so closely to the content of the story and that also adds a lot of emotion as well. You've really done a fantastic job with this. I didn't know how sad this was going to be. . but Jesus Christ, I'm still crying. And I love that. I love when I can get that much of an effect from a story. Beautiful job well done, my dear.

This is so sad. Before I go into detail, there was one thing I wanted to say.

Christmas had been Demetri and I’s favorite of the holidays. It should be Demetri and my favorite holiday.

Anyway. this was beautifully written. I really think that this had proved to me just how fantastic you are at writing. I'm in awe and I'm shocked at just how wonderful this is. I really think that the lines were beautiful written and poetic and just...sad. The line about her mother's voice being like fingers wisping through hair was probably my favorite. I feel like this is such a terrible comment, but I don't even know what ot say.

I loved it!

This was really, really good. First of all, I liked the layout but it didn't seem to fit the content of the story. The layout was light, but the story was very dark. I liked how well you described her emotions; you can really get a sense of how much she loved him and how serious she was about him, before he died and after. The ending was beautiful and I know it should be sad, but I couldn't help but be happy that she got to be with him again, even that way.

I've got a few things to say, dear. One, the layout is great. Two, the story was different from anything winter-y than I expected, but I liked it. My favorite part was when her mother was outside of her door. “Aspen?” Her tone was gentle, like fingertips brushing through the hair of a loved one. Ah, I just love that part. Overall, it was well written and the ending, the very ending, was great. I enjoyed the way you tied it off.

Well done, and good luck. Thank you so much for participating.

I very much like the layout, and how the dress and color match. Though, the yellow kind of hurts my eyes :/.

The begingin is already sad, I mean, her boyfriend died :(. It's so sad, he got killed by a train no less, poor thing :(. Aspen is such a pretty name :). They must've been very in love, because she explains her feelings with so much intensity. Ah, I had a feeling she would do that. I'm really hoping that she doesn't , but it might make her happier, she really wants to be wth him. But, to do that to her parents, her siblings, and her friends, I couldn't magine it :/. It's honestly a selfish act :/. Well, at least she was with Demetri, that's good. I have mixed emotions on the ending, it was sweet, yet sad at the same time. But, either way, very well written, as usual :).

Virginity!!!!!!!!!!
Was it a one-shot? Well I loved it anyway........=D