Most deff. Love the newest chapter! I like different emotions and drama... and also how fernando rlly felt about her. But I really dont like the way she's letting the boy use her and manipulate her into some twisted situation. But overall I love it!! :)
Glad that you turned this into something more, it was too good to not make it into a story. How she's so different and is doubting not only herself but how she doesn't want marriage or kids creates great tension between the couple. Excellent work!