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  • my immortal

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    LOVE. :D
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:52am
  • my immortal

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    That was a cute one! I love bff moments! Also, can't wait to see Nand back in action. Sigh, poor Kit the Insecure Idiot :)

    Thanks for the mention btw
    April 9th, 2011 at 07:00am
  • my immortal

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    Kit the Screw-Up. Sigh! Hope she cleans up soon :)
    And I loathe Noah, the liitle shite! But good chapter, I liked it.
    April 3rd, 2011 at 02:49pm
  • my immortal

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    Awwh! :( :( :(
    March 26th, 2011 at 11:23am
  • hellokitty2sexy

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    Most deff. Love the newest chapter! I like different emotions and drama... and also how fernando rlly felt about her. But I really dont like the way she's letting the boy use her and manipulate her into some twisted situation. But overall I love it!! :)
    March 20th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • hellokitty2sexy

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    Well I like the story but I don't like the fact that she's so doubtful and insecure, and also how she accuses him of cheating when he's really not
    February 27th, 2011 at 05:31pm
  • Tony_Stark.

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    I like this one! Keep writing, yeah? (;
    January 20th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • fireworks991

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    Glad that you turned this into something more, it was too good to not make it into a story. How she's so different and is doubting not only herself but how she doesn't want marriage or kids creates great tension between the couple. Excellent work!
    January 15th, 2011 at 01:01am
  • my immortal

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    Nice! :D
    January 3rd, 2011 at 01:32pm
  • sexychick9

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    LOVE! :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 08:27am
  • my immortal

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    I LOVE this! So amazing how well he knows her!
    December 15th, 2010 at 03:27pm
  • La.Bonne.Vie

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    I really like this story and being a fan of soccer myself it was easy to enjoy
    December 15th, 2010 at 06:37am