Contest comment. I've read the prologue and like half of the first chapter only, but this sounds pretty interesting. I like the idea of the past lives and the reincarnation; it's all interesting. In my opinion, I think it could get a little confusing to readers, because I was confused at the beginning but then I thought about it and understood after a while. I think this would continue to be a great story. The text colour hurt my eyes a little bit because it was quite dark, but other than that, everything was good. :)
I've read the prologue and like half of the first chapter only, but this sounds pretty interesting. I like the idea of the past lives and the reincarnation; it's all interesting. In my opinion, I think it could get a little confusing to readers, because I was confused at the beginning but then I thought about it and understood after a while. I think this would continue to be a great story. The text colour hurt my eyes a little bit because it was quite dark, but other than that, everything was good. :)