January 16th, 2011 at 12:05am
This was too wonderful. Too wonderful.
The first paragraph was perfectly. The way you described the lovers was amazing--it gave me a perfect feel for just how deep their love went, and I loved the language you used. Modern, yet classic.
I adored the mention of divorce/single mothers. The way it was out of place snapped me back to reality--this story will not end well.
And then it didn't, which was amazing. Those crazy fans--that's quite realistic. People go nuts with their obsessions, not that I'm one to talk.
Overall, this was beautifully written and I loved it so much. You are so wonderful. <333
One thing I noticed and maybe I’m wrong but: “Psychotic, deranged fans began sending her threating letters,” – I’m thinking it should be threatening.
But, I loved this to pieces and I really should read more of your writing!