Forrest - Comments

D: That made me kind of sad.

It was beautifully written though. Very interesting and kind of mysterious, like I wanted a whole back story on everyone that you mentioned in the story. I love when short stories are so awesome like this. It makes me happy :D

The only thing that I would say is to fix the banner because the picture isn't there anymore. I bet the layout was super pretty though.

But yeah, definitely loved this :D

This is...interesting. It's so mysterious, and so beautifully described; I'll have to check out the inspiration.
Your description is incredible; beautiful, like I said, and there's just the right amount of it. And I like how you charecterized as well, through his memories.

Lovely layout and overall, good job...especiallly for only 500 words.

There isnt much I can say except that I love this.
You have such an amazing writing style.

xo

I loved this! There was so much, yet never too much, in such a short piece of text, and I could definitely see the correlation between this and the inspiration. I also loved the layout, although admittedly I'm not much of a fan of centred text.
I don't know if there's a specific universe/fandom this is set in, but regardless, I thought it was beautiful and very well crafted. :3