You have no idea how much I love this. How much it mean to me that you wrote this. I know it wasn't something you really wanted to write, so knowing you did it just for me is really awesome.
I love how you kept this in time with the story.
So why is it I can’t seem to get up the courage to act on my wildest, kinkiest and most primal thoughts while she’s lying completely naked in front of me? - - I love how Teej is paralyzed despite how bad he wants to act. It's just a sign that he does in fact love her unlike Zach (hey not that I'm criticizing Zach).
If got the proverbial bull by the fucking horns and I’m pathetically limited to the role as spectator as Zach motherfucking Parise gets to reap the goods of his booze and ecstasy fuelled -and totally brilliant- idea. - - Good lord I'm a perv. cuz I agree with him - totally brilliant idea
“Fuck Johnny…” she snarls, and then grabs a hold of Zach by the hair and yanks him into a kiss. - - That's right you have Zach and Teej, please who the hell would want Johnny Toews?
“Hope you know we’re not done with you yet,” he growls, almost possessively. “There’s a long night ahead of us.” - - OMG - now that is one lucky girl.
“I can’t believe you…” she breathes and shakes her head. “…I can’t believe you did that…I can’t believe you taped it…” - - In all that shyness he was a very sly character.
“I think we should watch it again.” - - That's my girl Carm.
This may have been the hottest thing I've ever read. Totally amazing!!!!! I'd ask for more, but you'd kill me, so I'll just say THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!!