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  • brailey

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    This was a reallyyy good chapter. Like your skills are up to par. Like I swear this is the best one of the three. You did a lot of descriptive writing and its just totally awesome. I love her interaction with Ana!

    Ana reminded me of me, somewhat. Like that's how I act to my best friend xD
    January 2nd, 2011 at 12:59am
  • Kiss Me Deadly.

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    Hmm... This Ana character seems kind of familiar.... xD I like this chapter though :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 07:48am
  • brailey

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    Oh goodness I can just SMELL trouble! Keep updating missy! Good work =]
    December 25th, 2010 at 12:59pm
  • Kiss Me Deadly.

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    I liked this chapter :) Keep updating sir :P
    December 25th, 2010 at 11:57am
  • Tre Cool

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    It's good. I wanna see what happens.
    December 23rd, 2010 at 07:37am
  • Sharksnacks.

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    Thank you dear :D And I'm trying to figure that out...I would say about 17. :)
    December 23rd, 2010 at 07:04am
  • brailey

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    Keep developing the plot!! It's pretty good so far. We can tell that shes got an emotionally abusive alcoholic mom and an ex who shes prob going to sleep with. Question: how old is she? I couldn't really tell. Anywho, good job and can't wait for the next chapter!
    December 23rd, 2010 at 07:01am
  • Sharksnacks.

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    thanks :) :D
    December 22nd, 2010 at 03:09am
  • Kiss Me Deadly.

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    I really like it :D :D

    I didn't know what to expect, but I'm liking the plot so far, sirr. Keep posting :D
    December 22nd, 2010 at 03:08am