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  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    wooo!! they kissed! so excited! though...i can't tell if i'm Team Eric or Team John, i love them both. we'll see how it goes! glad you're back and sorry i never commented before now...or at least i don't remember commenting so here it is! =D can't wait for more!
    August 8th, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • forever.--

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    I can't decide! Im leaning towards Halvo though...hmmmm!
    Post soon! :)
    August 8th, 2011 at 08:42pm
  • ac8123

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    Yay!hah This chapter was adorable! Loved it and glad you're back(:
    August 8th, 2011 at 11:46am
  • lovely youth

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    Definitely Team John. You cannot beat that Peyton/John adorableness.
    Also loved her impression of him on stage. :)
    August 8th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    awwwww XD
    FINALLY!!!
    UPDATE :]
    August 7th, 2011 at 07:12am
  • Elisex

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    awww so cute! team john tho!
    August 7th, 2011 at 06:10am
  • lovelyhope

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    I loved this chapter. Since I'm Team Eric in "Telescope Eyes" I'm going to be Team John in this story. I don't want to play favorites haha. But, seriously, John and Peyton are adorable plus I feel as if they can help the other one heal.
    August 7th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • ineedacatchyname

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    Team John all the way. This chapter was tooooooo cute.
    August 6th, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • disappearing act.

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    I was hoping he would kiss her with the stache. fantastic, just fantastic.
    August 6th, 2011 at 08:21pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    Ugh omg I can't be team Halvo when they're so (almost) in love! and this was too cute for words! Really! I love how Peyton dressed up as a dude for a day and everybody's reactions hahahaha. And Peyton wants John to sex her up! I know they're gonna do it now! I just can't help but to feel bad for Halvo, he hasn't done anything wrong in this situation. I don't even know what else to say! I love this sooo much!
    August 6th, 2011 at 06:12pm
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    team john!!!!! they're so sweet together and i loved this chapter it was really sweet with the tanner/geo moments
    August 6th, 2011 at 04:51pm
  • Sanne_

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    I'm still team Eric. I'll always be. But I still love the story, no matter how it goes, just because you write it so damn good. I love it. Good job!
    August 6th, 2011 at 11:58am
  • mrstoday-

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    John's so cute at chapter 16. But still, team eric. <3
    July 9th, 2011 at 09:24am
  • thescenekid

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    Aw that was really sweet! I can't wait for the next ones!!!! :D Finally, a background of Peyton :)
    June 23rd, 2011 at 05:26am
  • lovely youth

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    I really enjoyed hearing Peyton's backstory. And the John/Peyton bonding time was lovely.
    But I need more Eric!

    Sorry for not commenting earlier.
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:39pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    Awww moment :]
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • troubled thoughts;

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    I'm so loving this story and this chapter is really good. I'm glad you finally wrote about her past.
    And you know I'm team Eric all the way, but I can take Peyton with John. This story is about John btw :D
    Great update! Can't wait for more!! :D
    June 21st, 2011 at 12:48pm
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    i'm so envious of your amazing writing skills, i hope one day to achieve what you've done with this story! the way you capture emotion is beautiful. =}
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:50am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    well, well, well.... look who updated. It's like you're trying to be back on mibba again these days....... I see how it is... slut.

    love you.
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:35am
  • lovelyhope

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    I enjoyed you putting more about her past in this chapter. I think you definitely achieved your goal of giving Peyton more depth.
    June 20th, 2011 at 11:00pm
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