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  • mollymoshpit;

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    I really liked this story. But I'm sad to see it ending.
    April 22nd, 2013 at 10:29pm
  • Parawhorree!x

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    i managed to get this far (chapter 12), but can't read any more of this. i dont like cassie's personality, it's like she's a push over and i like characters with a back bone that are feisty. this isn't that story.
    August 19th, 2012 at 06:30am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awesome endin'!
    Amazin' story!!
    July 20th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • pixie dusttt.

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    great story :]
    i'm glad that he proposed to her...

    =]
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Oh my Gosh he proposed to her :DDD
    I'm so happy for them.
    This story amazing
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:47pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Awe! I'm gonna miss this story!
    But it was an amazing story
    <3 Michele
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • londonnative

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    I so loved this story!!
    July 20th, 2011 at 03:13pm
  • liam payne.

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    DEAR LORD. I JUST STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING THIS.

    Kayla, I don't even know where to start. I can hardly type right now because I'm crying so hard. This is the most perfect thing I have ever read and to know you did this just for me is beyond overwhelming. I can't stress enough how much I loved it wholeheartedly. You're my best friend and this story means the world to me. It was so beyond perfect. Seriously.

    Every character is so dear to my heart. I loved the way you portrayed Matt, Zacky, myself, and yourself. It's brilliant, really. Reading this just felt so real because everything was just right. I can't believe it's over, because it was just so beyond perfect. I know I keep repeating that, but I'm really speechless and can't find any other words to say.

    The plot was so great, I was constantly on the edge of my seat, wondering when each action would take place, and what would unfold from it. I got tears when Zman was in the hospital, because I love that guy too damn much. x') And each chapter was just like a new adventure and it was so brilliantly amazing.

    Gosh, and the ending was just so... ahh :') The entire scavenger hunt I was grinning like an absolute madman. My smile was so big it was hurting my face but I just couldn't stop. My belly filled with butterflies because it was like it was actually me going through each clue. :') And then when MAttie popped the question I about fell out of my seat and died because it was so fucking cute and just DJFDJFDKJFDKJFDKFKDNRTKEWT.

    I really don't know what else I can say. :') I will never be able to thank you enough for this. It was just so, so, SO amazing. <3 You're the greatest friend ever and I'll never be able to thank you enough for this. I love you. <3
    July 20th, 2011 at 12:08pm
  • unbroken-

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    Omg!! i just read this from start to finish and it was so amazing i loved how matt was written so adorable and all that sexiness <3 but seriously what a great story. I also loved how the relationship between matt and cass was. they are such the adorable couple and they're getting marred ahhh... :) sequel please?? ^__^ <3
    July 20th, 2011 at 09:47am
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it :)
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:42am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this. Great honey
    July 20th, 2011 at 08:12am
  • sillyasian

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    They're getting married ! Awwww, that's amazing! :)
    July 20th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • bloodravyn

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    loved
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • Aaugustin

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    Moreeee :)
    July 16th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • Hypemo_O

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    Omg this is so cute!!! I love the whole scavenger hunt idea he's doing ^^
    Can't wait till your next update ^^
    July 14th, 2011 at 01:42am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    Matt's so cute and romantic <3
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    July 13th, 2011 at 07:29pm
  • perfectionist326

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    SUSPENSE!
    I'm excited for her now.
    Update soon so we can find the next clue too!
    July 13th, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Aww that's so sweet and romantic :)
    I cant' wait for the dinner matt's planning
    Great update
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:30pm
  • sillyasian

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    Aww that's super cute. I wonder what he is doing.
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:25pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    This chapter was extremely adorable!
    I love the scavenger hunt thing going on
    and i am really curious as to what Matt has in store for her!
    <3 Michele
    July 13th, 2011 at 04:13pm