April 8th, 2011 at 03:07pm
I've been subscribed to this story for quite awhile, I just haven't been able to sit down and read it. Now that I'm finally able to, one of the things I want to comment on is that I liked the layout you had before better. The colors and the photo all fit in beautifully, and I feel like the colors now are kind of...bleh. That being said--ONTO THE STORY.
The summary certainly draws me in, I'm definitely interested in reading the story simply after reading that.
For some reason I definitely thought that Ronnie and Veronica were two different people so I was ridiculously confused. I really like what you have so far, you've got a great descriptive voice and I'm definitely glad I subscribed to this when I did. I'm definitely going to make time in my day simply so I can read this. :) Great piece.
Great story by the way!