Doe Eyes - Comments

I love how this is a big ramble. I don’t really know how to put it but it’s just so simple and different and that truly makes it great. I like that I can picture this little boy saying all this and he is completely lost in his thoughts and confusion about some terms people use in everyday conversation. It’s like he just wants to figure out the world. The last line sent me grinning; it was just so cute.

I also must say I really like the whole black and white, fairly simple layout. I’ve always been fond of them. I also like how you can’t even see the eyes on the deer XD

I may have to go and read more of your writing!

With the two stories I chose to read from your collection, I chose the ones with animal names in them, because I'm an animal lover, baha. But anyways, I swear, I love the way you write just based on this and the other one shot I read. It's captivating to me. With this, I felt like it was written in a Stream of Consciousness. I'm not too familiar on the term, ah forgive me if I'm completely wrong, but I think that's what this is, and I like this type of style. It's how any typical human mind thinks - like how in the beginning the narrator trailed off for a second there. And the whole concept of this being centered around doe eyes is a nice little thing. It's a breather from all the elaborate plots and shocking moments. This is just simple, and go with the flow kind of stuff. I really did enjoy reading this. Fantastic piece :')

I decided to comment on this one because no one has. Which, to me, is very surprising. The name is compelling and I like the layout. There isn’t much going on, it’s simple and I like the picture that you chose.

This was very interesting, I’ve read it through a few times. It’s a bit confusing because it seems like there isn’t much information, but in actuality, there is a lot. The flow of this read a bit choppy, but I rather liked this. I feel like it’s written in the point of view of a curious young child. I’ve honestly never read a story like this and I very much like it.