School For Rock Stars - Comments

Interesting, I guess.
But, I wouldn't call any of those people "rock-stars"...like..ever, lol. Pop-stars, if anything.
Interesting, though.

Personaly I Like it.... Update Soon Please!!!

You should've called the teacher Mr Uxie! xDD
Cool, the girl sounds cute. xDD.
Keep going. *THUMBS UP!!!*

This is an interesting idea, and I agree with the other commenters that you do have a wide range of characters, thought it is a little over-whelming to take it all in. Your writing is OK, and your grammar and spelling is ok, but your writing lacks personality and a voice. One more thing I would work on is the personality of Mikey and the main character. Maybe it's just at first glance, but they seem a little 2-D.

Overall, it was a good story, and I enjoyed reading it.

I've never seen a story like this before, but it kinda gives me a Camp Rock-ish feel. You writing is pretty good, though there are spots where it seems a little bare to me, like you could've added more detail. I liked how you seem to have the basics of grammar and spelling down though, details will come as the story gets developed more. one thing that I didn't like about this was how Mitchie just fell over nothing, it seemed weird to me. Maybe go back and edit it so that she's walking and trips over her own feet or something.

Anyway you seem to have a pretty good start here, keep it up :)

For starters, the range of characters you have is pretty impressive looking.
There are some on the list that i really like, some i know of, some i'm obsessed with, some i've never heard of and some i well and truely hate xD But this is making me put my own opinions to the side to see what they're like in the story
Mr. Urie seems pretty nice xD I doubt my teachers could be that nice...actually that's harsh, they're alright most of the time hehe
And Mikey looks like he's going to become a pretty interesting character as well :)
I'm really looking forward to finding out who the nurse is now lol
My theories are just making me laugh haha
When i find out who it is, i have a feeling i might end up laughing about it tho xD
Can't wait for more! :) *Subs*

I really really like this. Im already anxious to see what happens next!
please please update soon?!?
Im subscribing btw :)

Getting the layout fixed up when I have high speed internet xDDDDD