It's Our Day - Comments

I liked it a lot. You story was cute. The writing is weird, I've never read something that moved along like yours, but it was good. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but it was a great story.
I love how the guys kidnapped her to give Matt some time to prepare the entire thing. It's adorable. Ah marriage proposal and the added bonus of getting pregnant... that is the dream of many Matt fans.

One friend in particular who hasn't been able to keep a girlfriend since Gena turned down his marriage proposal. It's been hard on Zacky.

For another, Brian he wants his love with his fiance to like Matt and Alice's love.

The problem with the story is that you added that to it, which is slightly unnecessary because you didn't evaluate about those little pieces. You already said, the relationship had them envious and since you weren't going to show the envious act in the story, those two sentences are just hanging there waiting to be pieced together.

That's about all that is bad. Great story though =)

YAY!!!!!!!!! MATT GOT ME PREGO !!!! IM MARRYING HIM TOO !!!!!!!! THATS LIKE THE BEASTEST FANTASY COMING TRUE !!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOP WHOOP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YIPPEE !!!!! *does awesome dance* i like it . a lot . not just because you wrote my biggest fantasy , but that it was very good !!!!! :DDD at least im not some creeper this time [: