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  • Kitten_

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    I love this story so much, please update!
    January 11th, 2013 at 09:53pm
  • OhBlake.

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    I love love love this story :) Can't wait for another update.
    December 29th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • pink tape

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    I'm so glad you updated. I like how Wade has two sides to him-caring and aggressive.
    December 28th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    I got the email and was like ahhhhhhhh that rocketed off over here
    Huzzah Christmas tree!!
    My family matches the tree XD
    I want pancakes now
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • Danyelle Alesandra

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    Poor doe but gotta eat I suppose.
    Great update!
    Theyre starting to work around each other so to speak.
    the way in which you write is lovely, there were no grammer
    or spelling errors that I found and everything flows together nicely.
    Waiting for the next:)
    Happy writting!
    September 18th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    I love his character a lot! And i love this chapter!! :)
    September 16th, 2011 at 02:08am
  • notrelevant

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    Carolyn and I have the same name :3
    September 1st, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • Wanderlust.

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    Oh my god I think you're awesome cause you have a Muse lyric as your summary
    I felt bad for her having nightmares
    O.O they're going to hunt, poor animals :(
    August 24th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • notrelevant

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    HEY THE MAIN CHARACTER HAS THE SAME NAME AS ME.
    August 20th, 2011 at 05:14am
  • Danyelle Alesandra

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    Ooo I dont want him to kill anything:o
    But good update!
    August 18th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    I like how Wade's becoming nice. One thing I will say though, is that the font is sort of hard to read. :P You must update more frequently!!!!!! :D
    August 18th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • wild thang.

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    Gosh man, do you know how much I love this story? I think I've read Chapter 10 over 4 times because it's just so romantic.

    Wade just seems so interesting, you know? He really seems like a kind of guy who would protect Carolyn but who would also hurt her. I'm really interested in what happens next!

    You know, I'm just saying, that maybe you could update? Just a suggestion. Just a friendly suggestion. *wink wink*
    July 30th, 2011 at 06:50pm
  • braintumor4breakfast

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    I absolutely love this story, please update soon i cant wait to read what happens next.
    July 25th, 2011 at 02:01am
  • erinlouisa

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    Aaawh, I really really like this! ^^
    July 24th, 2011 at 01:33pm
  • Lolita.

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    This is so amazingly complex. I love this story. I can't convince myself to love or hate any of the characters, but I'm not entirely sold and that's the mind game of the whole thing. Fantastic Job! It's as if everyone has gone loony in that house and their just taking in each others insanity. I've never seen anything like it. Update soon!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 07:16am
  • pjfunnbunny

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    please update more soon <3
    July 23rd, 2011 at 06:02am
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    Okay, I really like this story. You should update more tho!! I also am beginning to really like Wade. I mean, he did kidnap her, but he seems to have relaxed and your writing is amazing<3
    July 23rd, 2011 at 01:00am
  • erinlouisa

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    I love this. I hope you write more!
    July 17th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • Danyelle Alesandra

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    Nice update
    July 5th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • Saya

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    I really liked the prologue. It gave the right amount of detail--not too much as to bore me to death, and not too little as to not catch my attention at all. I wonder why she hates him... =O What has this guy done to her to cause such a negative reaction?

    I was a little disappointed to not see a layout. It said you had one up, but maybe I just can't see it? I don't know. XD

    lol, I think I shall continue reading this =D
    June 17th, 2011 at 12:11pm
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