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  • Nanook

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    Ugh, I'm sad this was never finished. You left off on such a cliffhanger too. :(
    I'm a bit confused with the last two chapters though; they were pretty much the exact same thing with Amelia's POV but when it went to Alex's it had two different events. One where he was hooking up with Lisa and one where he didn't. So which one was the intended chapter? I'm hoping it was the one where he didn't, the second one. Otherwise that would have been horrible. And it doesn't really make sense why he would hook-up with her again when he had such strong feelings for Amelia.
    But anyway, this story is seriously amazing. You are a great writer. And once again I'm sad it was never finished... maybe you'll see this comment and it will inspire you to complete it? I hope so. But I understand losing inspiration.
    But fingers crossed this will one day be completed. I will be here to read if you choose to do so. :)
    July 9th, 2015 at 08:18am
  • XxRawr-Im-A-KittyxX

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    Okay so I'm literally hooked on this damn story :S it's amazing, you must write more<3
    May 13th, 2012 at 10:06pm
  • AlwaysDeadly

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    UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!! Pwease? Pwetty, pwetty, pwease? :'D ~Love, an adoring fan
    March 30th, 2012 at 04:08am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    March 29th, 2012 at 10:48pm
  • dakunaito

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    Lisa is evil and psychotic.... she better check into a insane asylum
    March 29th, 2012 at 04:51am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    March 25th, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • dakunaito

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    I LOVE IT!!!!! :)
    June 23rd, 2011 at 03:17am
  • thepartyscene-

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    Oh em gee! I just started reading this story and I'm in love with it! Update soon, please!(:
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:31am
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    OMG!! I did not expect that!!
    You have to update soon, I need to know what she's gonna do!! :P
    May 29th, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • chasethecountylines;

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    HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!!
    She's fucking pregggo???? DAMNNNN -

    I'm begging you - update pleasee!!!! I must find out more!!!!!!
    May 17th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • catastrophic.love;;

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    baby!(:

    that's really all I have to say. OTHER THAN!

    UPDATESOOOOOOOON!!!!!! :DD♥

    kbye.
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • LindsaySometimes

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    I thought she might have been pregnant.
    Great story, cant wait for more.
    May 17th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    Oooooh! Someone's been fooling around with the teacher!(:
    <3
    May 11th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    May 10th, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • strangers in bars.

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    Ha, totally saw it coming when she woke up and was sick. :P I had an idea that it was going to happen before, but pushed it aside. Nice description of her emotions. Doctors wouldn't normally just say "oh see you in a couple months" if you're seventeen, i don't think...haha i actually don't know but whatever. love this story, keep it coming! :D <3
    May 10th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • DreamingofCalif0rnia

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    I LOOVE this story! I missed it, ahah :)
    May 10th, 2011 at 08:24pm
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    MORE MORE!(:
    <3
    May 10th, 2011 at 01:13am
  • catastrophic.love;;

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    That was glorious!
    Update again SOON! I've missed this.
    May 9th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    May 9th, 2011 at 09:13pm
  • shadow moses.

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    PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. UPDATE THIS. I AM DYING.
    April 5th, 2011 at 01:04am
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