OMG! Hahah i love how you ended chapter 9! Its all cliffhangery and you can think different things like if its her ex stalking her! jack alex or SOME RAPIST! ahaha and in chapter 6 the pic u had of what alex wore i have the SAME ZooYork shirt! so im like WOAH! and yeah haha im rambling! anyway i LOVE this sttory!!
I love this. :) but the only thing is you use the wrong words like your and you're then two, too and to. :') but that's all otherwise it's brilliant! xxx
five: this better not be deleted in later years because it's asesome, excellent, and just plain out cool. The people who read this yet are missing out on an awesome story. Wondering what's going to happen next?
four: another great chapter and loved how she egged him on to do coffeeshop soundtrack for the class. Descriptions were excellent. Wondering who pulled up? Alex? One of her friends or both? The dreaded ex? Gah the suspense is killing me here. Going to find out who right now.
three: great filler with great descriptions. Wondering what song are they going to pick? What will alex's expression be? Can't wait to read the next one.