Blood Lust - Comments

@ afargreencountry
Eh...when ended up happening was I got bad writer's block for every story I had and I ended up taking a huge break from writing. I'm actually a bit embarrassed about this now. I recently picked writing back up, so I hope to get back into updating this one.

~comment swap~
This story is so interesting. Typically, vampires and hunters and the whole shebang are not my cup of tea but the way you started the story makes me like it very much and I would love to see how you progress with plot and world-building. The only criticism I can offer is that the dialogue could be more organic and seem less forced and abrupt, especially the first chapter with Cyril and his dad. However, this is a great creative work. I like it loads!
Marie

- for comment swap- I guess I forgot to mention that in my previous comment and I can't figure out how to delete it. Anyways, I like Cyril a lot. His sister, however, not so much. She seems a little whiny but I think it is a good contrast to her brother. I think they'll make an interesting pair. This is much better than most vampire stories you find today!

I must say, this did exceed my expectations. But it seems that this story is a little old, so I guess we won't be getting an updates. I like the Van Helsing feel.

*from comment swap*
Okay. I loveeeee this. I love the idea, I love how you wrote it, I love your characters; everything.
But! I found 2 mistakes:
In ..although it was not strange for the Capedocian family to utilize the majority of its members as vampire slayers it still took him by surprise that a woman was fighting vampires.. there should be a comma between slayer and it.
And with “not today vampire…” the not needs to be capitalized.
Other than that, I love it. It reminds me a lot of the Lestat books by Anne Rice, and the movie Interview With a Vampire. Subscribed(:

This story is for the comment swap.

When I read the title, I was like, "no, not a vampire story."

For some reasons I just have a thing against vampire fiction on the net. But, then, I read the summary and I was immediately pulled. It has a Van Helsing feel to it and I definitely love the movie.

So far, I'm reading until chapter 3. I like Cyril's character. I'm imagining him to look exactly like Hugh Jackman. Well, that's just me being a total pervert. ^_^

Your writing is great and I don't see any grammatical or spelling errors. Your characterization is good, kudos to you. And the world you created in this story is just perfect.

Keep writing. ^_^

SO!

layout; hooked me into the story even more. i was all goo goo ga ga over it, it's really mysterious and i love it.

story i like the way you tied in the first chapter, it's sort of a 'what's going on moment' and you want to read more. i can't find anything that's wrong with the story, it's amazing, it really is. i'm going to sub and read the rest later on, your an amazing writer. absolutely fabulous!

Hi! Thanks for the comment and I must say, I like this story. Its so interesting! Especially the idea of Dracula being born and them fighting him.You give so much info on that ^.^ I love the layout, SO much! It's beautiful <3

I also love how you separate the story into different paragraphs, its so pretty ^.^

Keep up the awesome work ^.^

Windows r about to be broken

i like it XD very interesting and i can't wait for more XD

It sounds really interesting. I honestly can't say i have read anything like this before, but i am very excited to see what happens. I really like how you have Cicilia and Cyril as the two who are going to be the slayers...for a second when she told her mom ...about that... I thought she was going to say that she wouldn't be participating...yes it was a random conclusion to jump to but i was pratically praying that that didn't happen, so i'm really happy it didn't. i also loved that her name is Cicilia, because one of my friend's is named Cecilia... so that jus tmade me smile. I really think it's a great start and i can't wait till the person that they have to 'protect' is introduced. =) im subscribing!!!!

I LOVE this story!!!! Thank you for updating! Now....continue with this story!

Yeah I get to take your comment virginity, but anyways.
Cool story don't stop
Or I'll cry and bust your windows........
Just playing....
I think?