Guiding Lights - Comments

Oh no! I kinda expected this reaction but not this bad!

haha, by the way I'm reaaaallly sorry for all the typos in the message above... this storry has me so freaking frazzled! you just need to update little missy!

Yeaah, okay so I read this yesterday and I was in such shock that I couldn't comment until I let the chapter process through my mind.
Woah, just woah! This chapter was probably one of the best I've ever read and not just here on Mibba but like at all. You're defenatly an amazing writer and you really should strong consider it as a profession because you're the best I've ever read. Like you're up there with J.K. Rolling and Nicholas Sparks. It's like you can grip people's emotions without realizing it or something because you defenatly gripped mine.

So I went through a hand full of emotions while reading this chapter: it first started off with happy because I was like 'Oh Taylor updated yay!' but then when I started reading and realized just how pissed Nick was I was like 'Uh oh'. Then he like freaked on Eve and it kinda made me feel that feeling in the pit of your stomach like you know when something bad is gonna happen. And when they first got to the house and they started fighting I breathed a sigh of relief and I was like okay... so they're gonna work it out like they always do.
But then when Nick totally screamed the f word at her my mouth literally dropped and the phrase 'Oh no he didn't just say that' popped into mind immediatly. I literally when through this little phase while reading this chapter like okay Lonnie you need to leave because Nick is being a jerk right now. I seriously wanted her to leave him!
Ugh, it was like insaine! When they tried to go to bed I kinda got a sense of relief because younno in Eyes of Light whenever they would fight before they went to bed they ended up making up and then cuddling but... ugh! that was not what happened! It was just like you hurt so much for Lonnie because she's so lost and scared and Nicholas Jerry is being a totally a-whole!

And I have to admit when he told her that he still loved her and stuff it kinda gave me hope but then she exploded on him which probably wasn't the best thing to do... but I must admit I really enjoyed the scene where she started shoving him... haha, I don't really know why. I think it's cause she was kinda standing up for herself in a way and trying to make him see what a total idiot he was being. (Also today at school I will say I got pushed multiple times by mutliple friends of mine and the line Nick said somthing like 'Are you seeing how far you can push me, Lonnie' or something kept on flashing through my head and I really wanted to shout it at the people but that would be sorta strange :P haha).

Anyway, I was in tears when he left and it hurt in a way because it's like I want them just to be together and be happy! Haha, it sounds bad but today in study hall I was thinking through possible senarious that would happen to Nick like he would run to his family in the village and Joe would totally kick his sorry wolf boy ass. (which he really needs to). Also I kinda kept on comming with this theory that Lonnie would get kidnapped or something by Combria and then Nick would have to save the way (Well, hopefully). I dunno, I think Combria is still in the plot but he's kinda just in hidding right now and waiting for his time to strike and right now Lonnie is alone and completely in the open without Nick.

Lastly the baby. I have a feeling that the baby is actually a boy and is Nick's little wolf, I mean why else would Lonnie be drawing those baby wolf pictures? But it could be a girl but I don't think it's a witch... it could be a girl wolf (is that possible?). If it is a wolf then Nick is really over reacting because at least if it's a witch it's kinda sorta Lonnie's fault because she get's pregnate when she's at her highest amount of power... well what if she isn't there yet and the baby is actually Nick's fault. Well, it's Nick's fault either way because he simply couldn't keep it in his pants... haha, it's not like Lonnie can get herself preggers.

uuuhhh, you seriously need to update like as soon as possible... like I'm thinking a week from today would be the latest I would wanna wait for an update. It's just got me on the edge of my seat because I seriously don't know what's gonna happen! Nick has always been this strong person and he just left! He left Lonnie- his wife, his love, his whole life and, whether he wants to admit it or not, the person who is carrying his child!
I seriously am beginning to think that I am a tad obsessed with this story by the way... hahaha, I don't think it's healthy how much time I spend thinking about it and wondering what's gonna happen next.
Like today I was listening to my iPod in study hall (it really wasn't an eventful day in study hall) and I came across the song 'Time Bomb' by All Time Low which is off their new album Dirty Work and the more I listened to the words to the song I was like 'OH THIS IS SO NONNIE!!' lol. I really don't know if it is but it makes me happy when I can relate songs to life so I'm gonna just believe it does relate lol. I guess you can be the judge if it really does or if it doesn't... I mean it is your sotry. hahaha.

Sooooo, you really need to update because I don't know how much longer I can go on living without one!! So please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. I'm really sorry this comment is like a mini novel that the tons of others that have commented on this chapter but this chapter was seriously like amazing... like i said before you really need to go into a profession with this!

Wow.... I don't even want to speak to you right now because of this. (kidding).
This hurts more than Nonroe fighting. Nonnie is my absolute FAVORITE! wow..

ok...

WHAT THE HELL TAYLOR!!!! WHAT?! YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT! NO!!! Go rewrite and make everything happy and dandy please! My heart can't handle this D:

Oddly enough, i'm on Nick's side. I'm usually biased towards the girl in every single fic, but I am completely on Nick's side. I wouldn't want the kid especially if it's going to hurt Lonnie :(. But I would NEVER leave her! That is such a douchey move Nicholas! How can you walk out on her? Apart from anything she's hormonal! You're supposed to let her rant and shut her up with some chocolate and kisses or something, YOU DON'T LEAVE HER.

I cried. I'm actually crying right now! I'm telling you this story affects me way too much. I love my Nonnie and I can't believe you did this.

That being said, I love you for this chapter! haha. It was so so so well written! And it's such a great twist in their plot. Nothing has ever been this bad with them, so for this to happen and actually tear them apart it's huge! No black magic or Josh or anything has every teared them apart, but a baby has. And it's ironic because it's their fault. That's really ingenious story crafting right there! I am just in awe right now.

Please don't leave me too long without them together... my heart can't handle it! Especially when you did it at the same time that Nonroe is fighting!

awesome job though Taylor! :)
.xoMar.

update update update !!! (:

YOUR MAKING ME CRY D’;

GR I WANT TO KILL NICK SO BADLY. I WILL DIG UP HIS OWN GRAVE FOR HIM!!!!!

loved the update!!!!!!

Sooo... I go to boarding school and wont be able to read this for a month. I leave Sunday. So obviously u see my problem and u know u must update soon or I will send my flying monkey army at u.

and i TOTALLY agree with 'soul to squeeze'

& I cried!

loser nick.

I loved this chapter so much especially because it did surprise me!
Of course, I wasn't really expecting Nick to be happy-go-lucky about all of this because he is just like that. It wasn't what expected from him, but I didn't expect him to be this upset/angry/furious/lost/confusing above all ... he was so... just a whirlwind for me. My eyes were glued to the screen going over each word as if it were oxygen, dude. And Nick, my God, Nick is such an idiot.

I can understand that he is scared and that he doesn't want this, but he seems to be a bit hypocritical because he was mad at Lonnie for not telling him she wasn't feeling well and on the ither side he is not telling her what he really feels about the baby or what it is that is really making him react this way. I think it's fear; but with him we never do know, right?

Anyway, I admit that I have let out a few tears while reading this chapter. But all in all - just whoa. And why isn't her dad already going over to beat Nick up. Sure, Nick is a wolf boy, but I thought her dad would go through I-shall-kill-that-boy phaze [will he? Just for a paragraph?]. I really hope Joe kicks Nick's butt. Here's the thing - I always thought Nick was this brave man-child-wolf-boy but then he reacts this way and acts so cowardly that I can't even like him now. I cannot like him. That has never happened to me in all of your stories, I believe so. I have never disliked Nick no matter what he did; there was always an argument I found in my head that would make his actions seem right, justified... but this. I just can't with him right now.

That was extremely immature and horrible. Lonnie did push him, but he left on his own. He left because he is scared. Not an attractive trait on the wolf-boy [tell him that.]

Well, this would be the ending of my comment; as you can see I am pretty much upset with Nick a whole lot.

- Maya, ; )

when i first saw you had updated i was excited and ready to see what nick's reaction would be... now not so much...
i literally had tears in my eyes by the end of the chapter. it made me so fustrated, not at you but at nick's reaction to this whole ordeal. couldn't he suck it up like a man???
yeah sure he may be scared that something might happen to Lonnie because this baby is draining out her power, but shouldn't at least be with her incase something does happen??
what really made me cry in this chapter was the ending and how neither her father or eve knew how to comfort her and, the emotions that Lonnie was experiencing. the amount of emotions that she expressed in this chapter was more than 'Eyes of Light' and 'Light in the Storm' and in those two series i don't think she ever cried that much, especially when jeremy had stabbed nick.

the way you set out this chapter has been done beautifully. My heart was dramatically beating until it finally stopped when nick said he needed time.
please update soon, you can't leave me in suspense wondering what the future holds for nick and lonnie and if he is going to return to her during her pregnancy.
you should seriously consider becoming an author your writings are absolutely amazing and i definately know for sure that i would buy your books.
ok i'm going to stop blabbering now - *look what you've done... i've never sounded so sappy writting a review, nor have i ever written a review this long lol*
thank you for such an amazing chapter :)

Taylor, you had me in tears through all of this chapter. And I don't cry a lot...but this was wow. I'm speechless. Nick being so upset over this and Lonnie feeling so lost and alone definitely hit something for me and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm kind of mad at nick but I kind of understand with what you gave us...I can't wait to fully understand. Ah, amazing.

Taylor, you had me in tears through all of this chapter. And I don't cry a lot...but this was wow. I'm speechless. Nick being so upset over this and Lonnie feeling so lost and alone definitely hit something for me and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm kind of mad at nick but I kind of understand with what you gave us...I can't wait to fully understand. Ah, amazing.

Please, please, please update soon. This was beyond awesome. Prob your best chapter.

Oh my gosh, I cried while I read this recent chapter. It was so emotional. Man, you did really good job to write the entire emotional chapter. It was too sad when Nick can't accept the fact that Lonnie is pregnant! Please update more!

Oh my gosh. I cried. So many times. This chapter was very moving.

I understand it all perfectly now, but I'm still waiting for the baby. I can't wait for it to come.
I can't believe Nick's attitude. He has a right to be shocked, but he needs to realize that Lonnie needs him, and that she'll always need him. It's not like he's the one pregnant, SHE is. He needs to suck it up.

And Lonnie, poor, poor Lonnie. She's going to be so miserable without Nick. How could he leave her? What if Coimbra had attacked her or something while he was gone? She could have died alone in the middle of the woods. I'm glad she's safe. She has to keep the baby safe.

I loved the chapter. It was amazing. I can't wait for the next one.

So I've gotten into this lazy-funk state where I just read & don't comment, it's actually rude if you think about it. Considering the writer's put so much effort into their updates & then all I do is read them & go on without praising them for there killer writing skills. So for that, I apologize, because your writing never seizes to amaze me. I seriously love reading your stories. They always keep me on my toes & you know just how to play with my emotions. I almost feel as though I am Lonnie & I actually started crying during this... bawling would be a more appropriate word but... you know...
Any who, I really loved this chapter. & I obviously can't wait for you to update again.
:) until next time. Oh! & I promise to actually comment on your master pieces from now on (;
xoxox
Karlei

I am crying . I'm like so speechless right now . I don't know what to say . You have to update soon . I don't know how long I'll last without Nick there . Please , please , please , PLEASE update soon . Like by this weekend . No later than this weekend . I might die if you don't .

... I'm speechless.
I can't wait for more!