January 3rd, 2011 at 02:53am
I really liked this.
I have no idea how the Shaman King is though.
But I liked all the details in this, and how it just seems so surreal.
He just strikes me as sort of a God. (I'm sorry if I'm horribly wrong on this.)
This seems like a really interesting story, and I really like the layout also.
I'm shooting green lasers of envy at you at your writing. I love it so much!!
I liked the opening lines. They were very poetic.
By keeping him technically nameless, it adds a mystery to him. Like la voyante said, it makes him seem like a God figure.
This is powerful stuff. I love it!!