This is cute! My favorite pairing is Jongkey :) You write well I like your style. Update soon please. I enjoyed this story and if you have it updated on live journal please tell me your user name so I can read it there! :) Thankss!
Ahhh. I really love this. One thing that really stuck out to me was how Jjong wrinkled his nose in chapter 4. It's so...Jonghyun. In this fic it isn't two characters called Key and Jonghyun, they are the real Kim Kibum and Kim Jonghyun.
I like how you brought out their characters in this one. I loved the closeness between Jonghyun and Minho. And again, the last part of the chapter was my favourite. I just loved the idea of Jonghyun playing the piano, for some reason. /weirdo
Anyway. I'm excited to see this progress. I'm especially excited to see how the relationship between Jong and Key will develop.
I highly enjoyed this. :D Your writing style flows so effortlessly, and you write dialogue really well. And for such a short chapter, you captured and showed their characters brilliantly. My favourite part was the last sentence. It just made me go 'aww'.