Romeo & Juliet. - Comments

I really liked that story, it was sick, but I liked it.

That's a sick fucking ending there:D
I can't believe they died....

Once again just minor mistakes that are fixable..
Once more my favorite part is the ending: Zoltan was getting his Romeo and Juliet love, the end of it, but he still got it"

Amazing entry:)

I loved the ending"

Very good I seriously can't wait to read the second part. The use of the word is perfect and the plot is definitely unique. I like the character Michelle because she's strong:) Her sister is a bitch and the parents UGH don't get me started>.<

As strong willed as she is I want to know if he'll break her, make her fear him until she cries. I wonder:D

Romeo and Juliet is perfect way of letting him express himself. He's obsessed with something forbidden that he can't have. He's one sick Romeo though:P

There was some minor mistakes here and there but small and fixable ones. Layout was great. Readable and that's a plus:D

My favorite Part is the ending:He leaned in, taking her earlobe between his teeth, tugging on it a little. "Are you ready for the time of your life, Juliet?"