You Can't Win This Fight - Comments

So the first thing I have to say is that I really dislike Avenged Sevonfold stories because most of the time they're vampires and rapists and it's just not an appealing plotline. Same goes for bandoms, because mostly it's about some girl getting to go on tour with a bunch of guys magically and then falls in love with like half of them. But this is a breath of fresh air. While, I've only read chapter one so far the writing is where I'm like YES, PRAISE JESUS. Because the other thing I've noticed is those who write these types of stories normally have horrid writing--at least from my experience. The writing was fantastic, and even though I've read the first chapter I like what happened in it. I like it enough to subscribe and let you know what I think on the rest of the story when I'm able to get through it all. :)

I really liked this. :))

I'm not a big A7x fan but you are such a great writer man! UGHH- I am SO* jealous. >:D
Anyways, congratz on winning lovely. <3 I love your detailing, BTW I wasn't sure which
one you wanted me to read, but I chose this one, obviously. xD

I would love it if you would add more to it!

I like the amount of detail you went into with the first chapter.
I could picture Johnny blinking every two seconds to try and keep awake and then I can see his eyes fluttering close, his forehead leaning against the steering wheel.

I'm not sure about chapter two though.
I like it but, I don't think there's enough description in it and it feels kind of rushed.

Great story so far though.
Really great.

Why is this kinda funny?
I like it though