The Forbidden Fruit Always Tastes Sweeter - Comments

  • MinnieMayhem

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    Great story. One of the best I have read so far! Nice job and keep the stories coming :)
    June 24th, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    awwwww good way to end it lol
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:37am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Hope shes okay :( ty for the update cant wait for more
    June 15th, 2011 at 08:05am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    i love this story :) I def cant wait for more :) soon hopefully? lol
    June 6th, 2011 at 04:24am
  • thatcrackfox

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    Legit just read the whole thing in one go. This is such an awesome story line, I love it! Just the right amount of lovey stuff, and then the drama comes in at the right time too! Basically, its very well written ^^
    May 17th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • life.in.technicolor

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    oh Brian...why does he have to be so stupid?!?!?!
    April 25th, 2011 at 09:09pm
  • Vanzchyk2011

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    Dang Brian broke up with Luce
    April 25th, 2011 at 08:07pm
  • nicolecullen

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    I'm so in love with your story :) so I'm subscribing.please update soon :D
    March 15th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    WOOOO!! Go go go go Gadget Luce...yeah, no idea where that came from. Sorry.
    More soon? Please?
    March 14th, 2011 at 09:25pm
  • naturalbornsynner

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    Yayyyyy, update!!! <3
    McKenna FTW!!! =D
    Update soon??
    October 21st, 2010 at 08:43am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    awww!! Brian's really sweet!!
    more soon? please? sorry this comment is shit, cold relief ain't my best friend for being lyrical...
    October 20th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • mistery gurl

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    awww i loved her!!
    October 20th, 2010 at 05:49am
  • naturalbornsynner

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    Heyyyyyy!!
    Just finished reading everything you have so far....I FREAKING LOOOOOOOOOOVE this story!!
    Like really, it's great!!
    Please update soon! <3
    September 21st, 2010 at 08:44am
  • mistery gurl

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    haw i just read all 26 chpters
    i was at first, aliitle unsure of the story
    but with each chapter you have drawn me in
    closer and im sad there isnt more chapters!!
    please update soon :}
    September 17th, 2010 at 10:21am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    :-D They wuve each other!! Hehehehehehe. They so cute it's untrue. And so horny! Wanna hear more about Tea and Danny though?? Sounds interesting :-)
    More soon? Please?
    September 16th, 2010 at 11:29am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    I was excited to see that this was updated! I loved it :)
    September 16th, 2010 at 06:17am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I actually laughed out loud at the boys comparing shrink-age. I believe the appropriate term is "blue acorn"?? And surely a smaller...package helps them balance better? Not worrying about a third leg's gotta help!!
    Tough love is always the best; being cruel to be kind is funniest and makes you stronger. Or something. It's funny for those watching anyway :-)
    Love the update; you're awesome! Please update more soon?
    September 3rd, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • BrewShadowWolf

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    I hope you are able to get back into the swing of writing, I love your story.
    August 29th, 2010 at 09:58pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    I knew reading this felt familiar; low and behold I've read bits of it before. Man, do I love this story - Loon's epic and all the guys are so lovely! Even's Loon's mates; and her party's sound fucking epic. I would love to be a part of one of those!
    Please update this when you get the chance; it's such an awesome story!!
    August 29th, 2010 at 07:31pm
  • Derpina.

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    A miracle indeed =D I love the way his family fit so well with Loon. Perfect!
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:00am