My Lady Luck - Comments

I really like this layout ,and the name Billie too :)
aww her brother. does he want her to come travel with him?
but she refuses because she want's to have the money herself?
xD he's begging her on the ground, oh cmon Billie!
haha of course, how could you not give into that kind of persuasion?
haha that would be a lot of damn luggage no doubt
ohh she's gonig on like tour with them? since you mentioned band
i like the first cahpter! and the idea as well, i just like all of it actually
plus, I like Billie's character, she seems very strong. great job!

I really like this so far. I love Billie and Jack. I really feel that you did a great job developing their characters. I like how Billie gves in to what Jack wants and how you mention that it always happens. i really feel you made Billie's situation really relatable, since i know Jack reminded me of my couin, who does the same thing to me. Whatever you didn't say about them helped each reader kind of put what they thought about the two of them...if that makes sense. =) I also laughe so hard when Jack tried to get rid of Billie by trying to convince her to go with Damon. Great job! i was so disappointed when i realized that there were only 2 chapters (i mean that in a good way...)...im really excited to see what happens next! =)

I liked it a lot. It was really interesting to me. Damon associating with a band...the thought makes me giggle, but this story is really fascinating so far. The characters are really well-developed for just two chapters and the way you portrayed the Salvatore brothers' relationship was spot on. Billie's definitely a feisty character, I'm intrigued by her and I definitely love the way she and Damon are most likely going to clash. Damon obviously likes being in control of the situation and Billie seems like the kind of girl that won't let him. She looks like she likes having the upper hand and it's undoubtedly going to be one interesting experience for them. Oh, and I love Jack, typical bro in my opinion.

Overall, it's really well done. Update soon! xDDD

Fail. Totally didn't even realize you had posted this. But so far I"m totally in yo. I don't want to just repeat everyone else but it's very interesting, I like that you're taking a Damon story and starting it with a traveling nobody-band. I'm excited for Damon though. XD

i agree with forever_a_fighter, most authors do shove way too much in the first chapter, but not you. I like this and I hope that you will continue with it!!!! :3

This story is really intriguing. I like the summary, it drew me in. I also liked the banner, but back to the story. I enjoyed how simple the first chapter was. Some authors try to cram too much information down the readers throat in the first chapter, but this chapter was the perfect balance of information and length.