Choose Me, Not Him - Comments

  • CountSynula

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    Lmao. You're welcome. I saw it because someone recommended it. tehe
    April 6th, 2014 at 10:52pm
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    @ Synical
    Lol, I completely forgot about this story until you commented. Thanks!
    April 6th, 2014 at 09:28pm
  • CountSynula

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    Finally! Some Chester fics!
    April 6th, 2014 at 09:04pm
  • MissxVengeance

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    I loved this, it was awesome! I'm so glad this worked out nicely in the end, I just love happy endings :3 oh and I thought Mike's reaction when he walked in on the happy couple was hilarious xD
    June 28th, 2013 at 12:08pm
  • renai.

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    I didn't realize it was an insert until well into chapter two. Omg. But really nice. c:
    January 7th, 2013 at 09:43pm
  • Rev. Micki Plague

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    This is brilliant!!!! A sequel would be nice, even after so long :D
    December 8th, 2012 at 06:43pm
  • champion;

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    Ahaha I had to reread this.

    "Chester, what happened to your face?" For some reason, this made me lol. Idk why. XDD

    Looove thisss... <333333
    April 29th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • brianna7x

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    I lovvvvvved this. Hardly any Chester stories out there!
    :]
    March 4th, 2011 at 08:17am
  • MorningDoveofLight

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    *little kid voice*

    THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!

    :):):):)
    I really did like it. :) Expected nothing but the best and you hit it!!! :)
    February 3rd, 2011 at 05:20am
  • champion;

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    YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY
    not done yet give me a minute
    GET OUT OF THE DAMN STUPOR!
    excuse my french...
    I swear, if they come out with a song with a lyric like that, I'm going to be so freaked...
    Haha, I bet his breath stinks! lol
    "Ches, we're rock stars and there's a lot of girls that will have sex with you." --- i LOLed at this
    hehe, I wanted to punch Josh in the face, too bad Chester didn't get to do it for me...
    Mike's such a nice friend...
    AHAHA, Chester praying... sorry, If you've read some of the things I have, you'd know my thoughts on Chester and religion...
    THAT BASTARD! Lol. He was better off knocked out by a vase :D
    Just gotta say you spelled "dialing" wrong, not sure how i didn't catch that before...
    Liar! Be truthfull! lol.
    I'm not sure if Somewhere I Belong went with this, I probably would have put The Messenger from ATS
    ^^^ just saying.
    "You are a terrible liar," --- my second favorite line!!!
    "Hey, Chester, I need–OH MY GOD!" --- MY FAVORITE LINE!!!!!!!!
    you forgot the "-" for the Mike I love you part at the end
    You spelled "hear" "here" even though I think you meant "hear"
    I GOT A SPECIAL THANKS!!! YAY ME!!!
    lol.
    EPIE <3
    that was all in order, sorry for any confusion :D
    Great job, as usual.
    Now, me and Amrsmith8 abduct Derek from that prison...
    February 1st, 2011 at 04:45am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    I love the last chapter.

    And I didn't have to torture Derek (though I still will, lol).

    It was sweet and passionate and really justified, if that made any sense at all.

    It was just plain awesome XD
    February 1st, 2011 at 04:38am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Wow, this is sad.

    I seriously want to beat Derek then shove him in a dark tiny box.

    It was a little long, a lot of stuff in this one chapter, but I still really liked it.

    I can't wait to see how it ends!
    January 26th, 2011 at 01:27am
  • champion;

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    OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMGOMFGOFMGOFGM EPIE
    dont ask me where the epie came from
    i couldn't even press the space bar
    i just had the hugest spaz attack ever
    wow.
    sorry bout that.

    I am so freakin out. This was way better than I could have ever imagined! I was sooo not expecting this! You make my stories look.... sad, haha.

    First unexpected happening: They wake up in bed together.

    Second: It started with Chester POV 3rd person.

    Third: He basically gave her the hugest ultimatum a relationship can ever have.

    Fourth: Her dumbass turned him down!

    Fifth: She's changing herself for her fiancee (Stupid move!)

    Sixth: She doesn't mind that his parents critcize her.

    Seventh: Her best friend gives her another ultimatum! (In my opinion)

    Eighth(i cant remember how to spell that right now!): She goes and denies Chester(again!!!)

    Ninth: Mike calls her and starts talking about it! (Okay, not that big of a surprise, but hey, he was pretty harsh.)

    Tenth: She gets caught!

    Finally: THAT DICK STARTED SMACKING HER AROUND!!!

    Sorry, I'm the HE-UGEST womanist (or whatever its called, i can't remember) that you will ever meet.

    I swear to Hecae that if she doesn't drop him like a stone i will go into the Story world and slap her myself.

    Or I'll have one of my characters do it, probably in All Out War!
    bahaha.
    I'm sooo subscribing, I can't wait.
    And if you ever think about a sequel, I'd gladly write it with you ;D

    So anyways, great job! You are a lot more decriptive than I'll eer be. I need some serious writing classes, compared to you. Can't wait for more!!!
    January 25th, 2011 at 05:30am