Choose Me, Not Him - Comments

Lmao. You're welcome. I saw it because someone recommended it.

@ Synical
Lol, I completely forgot about this story until you commented. Thanks!

Finally! Some Chester fics!

I loved this, it was awesome! I'm so glad this worked out nicely in the end, I just love happy endings :3 oh and I thought Mike's reaction when he walked in on the happy couple was hilarious xD

I didn't realize it was an insert until well into chapter two. Omg. But really nice. c:

This is brilliant!!!! A sequel would be nice, even after so long :D

Ahaha I had to reread this.

"Chester, what happened to your face?" For some reason, this made me lol. Idk why. XDD

Looove thisss... <333333

I lovvvvvved this. Hardly any Chester stories out there!
:]

*little kid voice*

THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!

:):):):)
I really did like it. :) Expected nothing but the best and you hit it!!! :)

YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY
not done yet give me a minute
GET OUT OF THE DAMN STUPOR!
excuse my french...
I swear, if they come out with a song with a lyric like that, I'm going to be so freaked...
Haha, I bet his breath stinks! lol
"Ches, we're rock stars and there's a lot of girls that will have sex with you." --- i LOLed at this
hehe, I wanted to punch Josh in the face, too bad Chester didn't get to do it for me...
Mike's such a nice friend...
AHAHA, Chester praying... sorry, If you've read some of the things I have, you'd know my thoughts on Chester and religion...
THAT BASTARD! Lol. He was better off knocked out by a vase :D
Just gotta say you spelled "dialing" wrong, not sure how i didn't catch that before...
Liar! Be truthfull! lol.
I'm not sure if Somewhere I Belong went with this, I probably would have put The Messenger from ATS
^^^ just saying.
"You are a terrible liar," --- my second favorite line!!!
"Hey, Chester, I need–OH MY GOD!" --- MY FAVORITE LINE!!!!!!!!
you forgot the "-" for the Mike I love you part at the end
You spelled "hear" "here" even though I think you meant "hear"
I GOT A SPECIAL THANKS!!! YAY ME!!!
lol.
EPIE <3
that was all in order, sorry for any confusion :D
Great job, as usual.
Now, me and Amrsmith8 abduct Derek from that prison...

I love the last chapter.

And I didn't have to torture Derek (though I still will, lol).

It was sweet and passionate and really justified, if that made any sense at all.

It was just plain awesome XD

Wow, this is sad.

I seriously want to beat Derek then shove him in a dark tiny box.

It was a little long, a lot of stuff in this one chapter, but I still really liked it.

I can't wait to see how it ends!

OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMGOMFGOFMGOFGM EPIE
dont ask me where the epie came from
i couldn't even press the space bar
i just had the hugest spaz attack ever
wow.
sorry bout that.

I am so freakin out. This was way better than I could have ever imagined! I was sooo not expecting this! You make my stories look.... sad, haha.

First unexpected happening: They wake up in bed together.

Second: It started with Chester POV 3rd person.

Third: He basically gave her the hugest ultimatum a relationship can ever have.

Fourth: Her dumbass turned him down!

Fifth: She's changing herself for her fiancee (Stupid move!)

Sixth: She doesn't mind that his parents critcize her.

Seventh: Her best friend gives her another ultimatum! (In my opinion)

Eighth(i cant remember how to spell that right now!): She goes and denies Chester(again!!!)

Ninth: Mike calls her and starts talking about it! (Okay, not that big of a surprise, but hey, he was pretty harsh.)

Tenth: She gets caught!

Finally: THAT DICK STARTED SMACKING HER AROUND!!!

Sorry, I'm the HE-UGEST womanist (or whatever its called, i can't remember) that you will ever meet.

I swear to Hecae that if she doesn't drop him like a stone i will go into the Story world and slap her myself.

Or I'll have one of my characters do it, probably in All Out War!
bahaha.
I'm sooo subscribing, I can't wait.
And if you ever think about a sequel, I'd gladly write it with you ;D

So anyways, great job! You are a lot more decriptive than I'll eer be. I need some serious writing classes, compared to you. Can't wait for more!!!