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Why does this story not have more comments? I don't watch Glee, so I wasnt really as educated on the characters but you write beautifully. Very talented girl. I hope you keep writing. Youre good.:)

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It's a shocker than I have been so busy that I haven't had the chance to sit down and watch Glee- not even once. :( I thought this was quite cute and enjoyable. The song fits in very nicely too.

+2 brownie points for a homemade layout and using exact quotes. Great work! :)

You have no idea how excited I was when I saw another Klaine fanfic on here!

I saw this because it was written for a contest I'd entered, and when I clicked on it, I knew I had to read it.

You've really understood the relationship they have - you describe it so beautifully and tenderly and it's just as lovely to read as it is to watch. I also feel that we rarely get to see Blaine's point of view, and your narrative really gets to show what he thinks and feels about Kurt, while still also presenting both sides of the story. It's done so well!

I spotted one little mistake - in the first paragraph, you say "Blaine new from the beginning that he would go to great lengths to show Kurt just how incredible he really was." I assume you meant knew instead. I also think that the speech seems a little bit strange in bold - I think it would be fine just to have it as normal text, or maybe italices if you wanted it to be apparent that it wasn't yours, even though I think the author's note is enough for that. However, that's just me being fussy over aesthetics, because it didn't detract from your story in any way.

But this really is lovely - so well-written, with absolutely gorgeous description. It's so sweet and romantic and just amazing. I love it so, so much.