Stopping the World - Comments

Nice way to end the story! Now time for the sequel :D lol. I wanna see what happens between Marley and Amberly, like, if they eventually become friends since they're going to be with each other a lot? Anywho, can't wait for the sequel :)

I loved the way it ended, and am definitely going to check out the sequel!

Well, first of all, I don't believe that a little cliche is bad. It makes a story lifelike. Most lives have some cliche in them, whether planned or not, and so it's good to add it in.
In my personal opinion, I think it might be just better to end it with the aftereffects of the time rewind BUT the thing is, is if you have a fabulous idea that you're just waiting to have burst out of you having to do with the other earths and the other families then I say go ahead! It would be interesting to see if any of the families interact and if Galilei and Darwin play more prominent roles in it. Anyway though, that's just me. Some stories have the perfect ending for their type of story and sometimes it may not exactly be the way the readers might want but it may fit how the story played out. Just sayin'.
Other than that, can I tell you that since the beginning of this story to the end that you've grown in your writing abilities? It's fantastic to see considering you were wonderful at the start. Just thought I'd let you know. ;]
Update soon darlin'.

Yes there should be a sequel! That was a depressing ending, right after Marley and Nick were finally together again and she had to leave and same with Michael and Anna :/ I didn't see that coming at all. Update soon :)

Oh my gosh, yes there has to be a sequel! Lol..:/
The update was just absolutely amazing, yet I was crying towards the end. That sucks. That really, really sucks that Nick just gets to forget everything.
I really didn't feel like it was too predictable, or even cliche, really.
I hope you update soon and get all the comments you would like soon! (:

And again I am back. I feel as though I did somewhat call the alternate worlds theory-proven-fact, but now I am questioning the age of both Darwin and Galilei - and Amberly. It really comes as no shock to me though after finding out that Amberly was Darwin's daughter that she was sent to keep Nick and Marley apart. That's another thing! Where's Nick? Might he be able to contact one of the other three families that hold the wind, fire, and water worlds? Or does he have some connection to Galilei? Many questions must be answered. haha. Along with the fact that you can sustain head injury by being knocked out twice in a row. It's kind of like jarring the brain around too much inside of the head if I remember correctly.
Oh and congratulations on the 17 subs!
Much love darlin',
Julie

I just read the last few chapters I had missed. This is so good! I can't wait for another update :3

Yeah, I was kind of wondering about Amberly..
I can't wait to find out where Nick is and how everyhting will turn out.
Though, thank you for no cliffhanger (:
Darwin produced something like Amberly..? That's just..hilarious.
I loved the update..another soon?
(Two more!)

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Omg I love this, I cant wait to find out where Nick is!
<3 Maddy

First off, yay for no cliffhanger! lol. I don't know if it was just me but I thought it was kinda funny when Darwin was getting annoyed with Amberly. lol. I still wanna know what happened to Nick! Anywhore, I loved this update and I can't wait for the next one!

So sorry for the delay in commenting! Really :/
School and such.
Darwin seems like an angry man indeed, and I found his and Marley's conversation'interaction humorous. But maybe that was just me.
I loved the update, and I'm glad you updated (:
I'm sad to hear that it'll be ending soon, but I know it'll end great because you're an amazing writer.
And, lol, whenever Darwin said "I'll be back." I instantly thought of the Terminator. Sorry :P
Yeah, anyway..Update soon?

Oh my God, I seriously did not see that one coming! But where are Nick and Anna?! And what's gonna happen to Michael and Marley?! Hahah, and here we go with another cliffhanger! Damn Jenna. lol. But it was a great update and I can't wait for the next one :D

BA-BAM! I'm back. ^_^ Miss me?
I'm happy to have read about three updates since I last was on and able to read. It's getting pretty tense all up in here! I wonder who it could be that would have a different version of the world? Yes, I am sticking with my theory. Wicked excited to see what you have in store next, and also, sorry i haven't been keeping up with this, haven't been on Mibba for ages and I almost forgot about it to tell you the truth. Congrats on getting more subbers, deary. ;]

Nooooo! Nick got captured and now Marley might get caught too! I love this story! Please update soon! I also subscribed. :)

Here you go, leaving us on yet another cliffhanger >_< lol
But this was an intense chapter! I really, really, reallllllly wanna know what's gonna happen next! And I wonder what they did with Nick...Anywhore, update soon? :D

Alright, Jenna, that seriously isn't right of you to leave us hanging yet again ;P
Wow, so a little bit of drama at the beginning there and at the end..or not really at the end, but you know what I'm trying to say, right?
I can't wait for the next update, though I'm not sure as to what I can be expecting. Well, I have an idea, but I never know exactly....So, update soon? (:

Okay, now that I'm caught up, I'm sort of mad that you left it like that..lol.
But also, it keeps us until at least the next chaoter..so..yeah
It does make sense, though, as to why Michael is unfrozen because he was meant to receive the world..
But, I'm still kind of curious as to why he didn't get in originally..
Update soon?

Great update(: I'm curious to find out why Michael is unfrozen!

Oh my God, really Jenna, really? Another effing cliffhanger?! lol.
I wanna know where Nick is and why Michael isn't frozen! But I am glad that you finally got another update :D
Update soon please!

Yay! An update(: I wonder why Michael is unfrozen...I guess we'll see in the next update. (: