I love your story! its really unique that you have a girl playing hockey in the NHL and on the MENS Olympic team and just all in all being one of the guys, while still dating one of them! Not to mention that i just plainlt love hockey haha :D i reaally do love this story :) i cant wait for more updates! and i also cant wait to find out whats up with her family that suddenly decided to contatct her. Awesome job!
I have to admit that I'm a die-hard Capitals fan, but I love your story so far. I've been playing hockey for almost 7 years now, and I'm a chick that's trying to make my way in the hockey world. I really love this story, and I hope that you continue writing and updating this great story.
I totally know where you're coming from about not getting comments, since I'm a writer too. But if you enjoy writing it, you should continue! I really like this story, and I'm sure tons of other people do too! :)