Save Me - Comments

Great start!
keep going and make this a kick ass story,
it's sure headed in that direction.
:D

Okay, so first of all, I won't lie; the summary pulled me right in. After I read it, I was like OMFG WHY IS SHE IN THE HOSPITAL AND CAN'T REMEMBER ANYTHING!? D: To me, it sounds extremely surreal; I truly have no idea why. Onto the first chapter. I really like how you started this, describing the apartment and how it makes her feel, especially since she was hurt in the car accident with her mother. I can totally feel how she feels - scared and alone and empty. I mean, wouldn't any other kid who just saw their mother/father die be that way? I know I would :( This was a very good start; I keep wondering what happened in the summary to make her not remember. Hmm. I'll be stalking this ;D Lovely job! <3