Her Guardian Angel - Comments

Amy, baby, you are an amazin' writer, so shut the fuck up. (: Lol. I love your damn writing, and it's hard writing as a little kid, dude, I've tried, and failed. Haha. Anyways, I love you. <3

I don't think you did a bad job with this at all. Like you said, it's hard to write in a five-year-old's POV. I think you're doing just fine with it. There were some typos, but I'm kinda tired right now, so I will let you know what they are later. But you did a great job with the update, and I'm looking forward to more!

I didn't think that it sucked at all! I thought that you did a good job with this chapter. It was nice to see things in his POV. I'm looking forward to reading more!

I was just thinking about this story earlier today, and then when I checked the updated stories, this was like, one of the first on the list, and I was all, "AHHH." So yeah. (:
Wow, what a fuckin' creep. I mean, I'm gonna assume this is kind of like imprinting in Twilight, or whatever, and that poor Jyrki doesn't have any control over it, but still, what a fuckin' creep. (;
I still love your writing so much. <3

Of course I love it! So many little kiddies.
And the psycho crazy bit about the fat kids made me giggle.
Little Brandan makes me grin from ear to ear. <3
But, that frightening sounding man does not. eeesh. /:
VEE WANTZ MOOAR.
:D But, take your time if need be. <3

I loved this, baby girl. (: Keep it! :D

I think that you're off to a good start!

And I know you told me this ahead of time, but their mom is really awful! It's sad to know that there are actually mothers out there that are like this... Poor kids. But I did enjoy reading this first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more!