I seriously don't know why there aren't more comments on this. This is beautiful and heartbreaking. Your descriptions are just breathtaking. I mean like this: She was a walking structure of calcium, cloaked by a thin veil of skin and veins and arteries- Wow. just wow. love it. And I think this line was my favorite: But she never spoke with life. Not even her glassy orbs of apathy spoke of life.- something about it just struck me, and the phrase "glassy orbs of apathy" is just brilliant. And I loved how the two completed each other and the comparisons you drew from that. His tongue sung lullabies of passion, while her lips whispered hushed promises of departure. And whenever that happened, he’d envelop her with muscle and skin, keeping together her delicate skeleton under his solid frame. -Like that. I love that image of completion. She's the bones and the arteries and he's the muscle and the skin that keeps it all protected and whole. I just love the depth of their relationship and his undying love. It's so beautiful and so heartbreaking. Great work. (also, I'd just like to note I love how the status says "fractured" :3 )
I mean like this: She was a walking structure of calcium, cloaked by a thin veil of skin and veins and arteries- Wow. just wow. love it.
And I think this line was my favorite: But she never spoke with life. Not even her glassy orbs of apathy spoke of life.- something about it just struck me, and the phrase "glassy orbs of apathy" is just brilliant.
And I loved how the two completed each other and the comparisons you drew from that. His tongue sung lullabies of passion, while her lips whispered hushed promises of departure. And whenever that happened, he’d envelop her with muscle and skin, keeping together her delicate skeleton under his solid frame. -Like that. I love that image of completion. She's the bones and the arteries and he's the muscle and the skin that keeps it all protected and whole.
I just love the depth of their relationship and his undying love. It's so beautiful and so heartbreaking.
Great work. (also, I'd just like to note I love how the status says "fractured" :3 )