Holy... Wow. So I will say that I am in awe of this story, the way you described everything had me picturing it in my mind. At first I pictured people all huddled together and then I pictured small cities with small apartments. I even pictured the doctor as a man with a long beard for some reason, I don't know why. Lol but getting back to the point, the way you wrote this is amazing and I honestly can't wait to see what happens next. I really want to know what happened to the doctor and I would love to see where you take this, keep up the great work. I even pictured her mom crying by a window. Your doing great.
May 15th, 2015 at 11:40pm