After the Sun - Comments

Holy... Wow. So I will say that I am in awe of this story, the way you described everything had me picturing it in my mind. At first I pictured people all huddled together and then I pictured small cities with small apartments. I even pictured the doctor as a man with a long beard for some reason, I don't know why. Lol but getting back to the point, the way you wrote this is amazing and I honestly can't wait to see what happens next. I really want to know what happened to the doctor and I would love to see where you take this, keep up the great work. I even pictured her mom crying by a window. Your doing great.

@ The Snow Queen
Ah thank you darling! And yes, it'll have a sequel. I'm posting it because I'm reworking some new information into the story and it just helps sort everything out. But once this one is for sure finished I'll start on the sequel.

Will this have a sequel?

I really hope it gets published as well. Get it out into the world, show 'em your talent!!

This deserves to get published. Let me know if it happens, I will buy a copy!

Oh and you have to let me know when you get it published! I will be first in line to buy it and force all my friends to buy and read it too.

OMG! That was EPIC! I can't frickin' wait for the sequel.

OMG THANK GOD THERE'S GONNA BE A SEQUEL BECAUSE AFTER THAT ENDING I WOULD HAVE KILLED YOU IF THERE WASN'T ONE

you are giving me major anxiety. In a good way.

omigod this is getting really climactic

fuck omg who's opened the dooR

SOMETIMES I LOVE CALEB OK

OH MY GOD BILLIE THIS UPDATE THOUGH
HOLY SHIT THIS IS LIKE
this is super climactic oh my
but then again I feel like every chapter is climactic \m/

I love how Noah pushes Annie omg
I must sound like such a hypocritical bitch cause lulz look at the comment below
also mine

OH MY GOD WHY IS NOAH A LIAR
THAT WAS A GOD DAMN GREAT STORY IF HE'S LYING

oh my god dis nightmare gon' be killin' Annie
swerve
I don't know why I just said that but okay

aw Annie :((((((
I like this Caleb omg
I want him to fight
I want him to fight for Annie and fight out of the dark
and Annie can ditch Noah cause obvi he isn't doing jack shit
and then Annie and Caleb can be together again

so good :D x

GOD DAMN IT CALEB RUINS EVERYTHING

I seriously hate my life right now. I had this massive comment for you and I lost it. The entire thing. I had comments on prologue and chaptesr 1-7 done. And it's gone and I feel like crap.

I guess the gist of the comment was something along the lines of: oh my goodness, your writing is so good. Annabelle and Noah are awesome and I seriously love them both. I think the story line is flawless and your writing is definitely some of the best writing I've ever read on this website. It's a really interesting idea, post-apocalypse type of thing with the whole Outside and the no sunlight. It's really interesting and well developed. Definitely one of the best stories on this site :)

wait then what will they turn into if not dust