Okay, so. I really liked the wording of this and the flashbacks, and how you interpreted and portrayed the song. The only thing that really wasn't up to par was your spelling and grammar, but overall it was really great with a good plot and good pacing. But yeah. If you have time, and you go back and fix the errors (or have a beta help you), it'd make the story even better, so maybe keep that in mind? Good job though :3
I really liked the wording of this and the flashbacks, and how you interpreted and portrayed the song.
The only thing that really wasn't up to par was your spelling and grammar, but overall it was really great with a good plot and good pacing.
But yeah. If you have time, and you go back and fix the errors (or have a beta help you), it'd make the story even better, so maybe keep that in mind?
Good job though :3