Fix It - Comments

First I got to say I love the layout.

Now with your story
Ok everytime I read your things, they don't seem like they are fanfiction, but more of original fiction. lol I'm trying to figure out the celebrity here. U are an amazing writer, I love the detail u put into this.

Keep up the good work :)

just curious but are we ever going to find out who the closet monster is???? i wanna know sooo bad!!!! its creepy and i know how it feels when you hallucinate after being up for days (not exactly proud of it but its happened) its a nasty ugly terrible feeling seeing shit that nots there...hahhaha!!! but i love this soo much!!!!

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its soooo amazing!!!! i feel as if i am the characteer, shooting up waiting for that spark of inspiration that comes with the high, the release from the real world to a world were anything and everything is possible...i love this and im really anxious like, who is the thing thats after him? who is the thing in the closet??? i'd love to find out, well done!!! I have done what the character does (not with Heroin but with weed, heehee;]) its a good brain sparker, I don't advise the use of drugs but Im just saying it helps heehee

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its soooo amazing!!!! i feel as if i am the characteer, shooting up waiting for that spark of inspiration that comes with the high, the release from the real world to a world were anything and everything is possible...i love this and im really anxious like, who is the thing thats after him? who is the thing in the closet??? i'd love to find out, well done!!!

Thinking, lost in though. - thought

He was on the verge of being kicked out, and he was the one who had brought the entire goddamn band together! - I like how that's presented, and it creates that anger, and it's valid for the character. :) It makes sense. I also like that how the rest of the paragraph supports that idea, and that it feels real. Like, it's just that common thing in bands. Reminds me of Chris Cornell and Audioslave.

The second paragraph seemed a little contradictory. At first, it seemed like he was going to get high, then write something. But then it sounded adamant with the idea that the fix was the reward if he wrote something - and then it was the former again. It was slightly confusing - but it's clear that the fix is important either way.

He was going to need a fix very soon or risk.... or risk going through withdrawal of it, because he was so attached to the precious drug, it was like his lifeline, without it he was nothing. - I feel like this on purpose - that you illustrate the idea in his head that he's not an addict, but you show the reader that he's kind of in denial about it. If that's the case, I think it's a really nice device within the plot - kind of helps with the story that maybe he is a bigger problem in the band, and that without him, maybe things will run a lot smoother because there won't be an addict who is strung out and ready to lash out if he doesn't get a fix soon.

He had waited too long and now was in dire need of a fix, he didn't do this often, which was a good thing because if he did he would suffer through some supreme withdrawals - I don't think I get this. He's possibly had it a lot if he's having withdrawals, because I don't think that drug is something you can just go oh, I'll control myself. It doesn't feel like the narrator knows best, rather that they're on the same level. So it just seems a little off. :/

Is this kinda based on Nikki Sixx and the little blue mexican things he was sure were after him? And then he would go and hide in the closet, and then armed forces would be after him too? That's what it reminds me of in the end. :)

Anywho. I like that you explore the need for the drug, the influence behind it and what it would mean on a bigger level if he didn't have it, yet what it also means if he carries on with his 'problem.' I think, though, you repeated a few things that would have been great just said once - like the first time they were said, they had that impact, then they would be repeated as if the picture wasn't clear enough. But other than that, I think it's a neat little story. :) And I like that you don't end it with a conclusion of sorts, you just leave it there for possible interpretation, or room to write another chapter.

Y'know what I don't get about some Mibbians? That they don't give good comments to people who deserve it and that they don't know a great story when they see one; and this is one of them. This is one of these stories that almost everyone can relate to - especially about fixing their lives. I think that this is my favorite piece by you; it says so much. I like how you really get into this man/character's head. It's a bit vague to me, but I actually love vagueness in stories; it adds something that I can't really put my finger on, haha! But I really do like it (: The ending, however, made me so sad. I'm guessing this character was a recovering addict? :( That's so awful. It seems like he's trying to get his story out incase he dies or something; the end leaves alot open to the reader and they can basically infer what goes on long after the story ended. Okay, I'm rambling and barely making any sense over here, so I'll stop now xD
Anyways, lovely job! <3

Wonderful. Amazing. I'm jealous.
This was great, darling. I nearly died. <3