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- Technibabble:
- Shit Ash, that was fucking brilliant!
I salute you, with all my awesome...salutingness. :3
*laughs* I'm glad you took the time to read it and liked it...but there are only Five Steps...
- GreenDay4Ever:
- Sorry, it took me awhile to find time to read it...
Then I did read it, and I was like:
Wtf, you ended it? lmao. That was a shockerr.
XD
Anyway, I loved it. :D
It was really cute.
Fascinatinggg.
Wooo!
haha.
thank you so much!
- cat in dryer:
- i love this!! :D
thanks..lol....and blabbering is okay, it flatters me all the same..
- Ridele:
- Absoultely beautifully written. Yes well done I love it!
"Mike took off his ruined shirt and ripped a sleeve"
That line made me grin so badly...wow. What a medic Mike is. Great Ash, this was really good, you could tell that you have taken time writing, it was so great...really great. Yes I'm repeating myself now because Im astounded.
Hurrah!
Loved it...
xxxx
thanks...I did kinda feel like I was I dunno...lurking in teh shadows of their house or something...lol
- The_lucky_stars:
- this is a realy great story!!! love it so much! youn describe the thing like you were there
it's so... amazing!!!
thanks so much
- finnishrebel92:
- This was amazing!! I loved it!!!
Very good ending=)
thanks Kristina! I'm glad you like it..I loved writing it as well..and when I write funny I make it piss yourself laughing funny and when I write serious I make you almost cry..I try to please..*laughs* and i loved this comment..it made me feel all good inside...
- Slap Happy Bullet:
- oh yes...
definately one of the most detailed love scenes ever...
even more so than movies.
i loved it when mike took off his shirt to help billie out... you mentioned mike's smile when he bought it. that was just awesome.
"Shivers went up and down Mike’s spine as everything he’d ever wanted had so conveniently fallen into his lap."
that was so amazing. i can't even explain it. like... not even that it was billie and mike. sometimes, things happen like that. you just have this overwhelming feeling when everything seems right, even for one moment. you nailed that detail...
but by far my favorite was the ending.. "But accepting it as his drug is the first step."
mainly because it's actually the 5th step... but it's the first to a much longer journey. that line could go with anything..
you just have a lot of universal quotes and what not.
i loved it ash.
i really did...
and i like you writing from a very serious perspective. but i also like your funny side.. so you're just plain awesome.
- Slap Happy Bullet:
- oh yes...
definately one of the most detailed love scenes ever...
even more so than movies.
i loved it when mike took off his shirt to help billie out... you mentioned mike's smile when he bought it. that was just awesome.
"Shivers went up and down Mike’s spine as everything he’d ever wanted had so conveniently fallen into his lap."
that was so amazing. i can't even explain it. like... not even that it was billie and mike. sometimes, things happen like that. you just have this overwhelming feeling when everything seems right, even for one moment. you nailed that detail...
but by far my favorite was the ending.. "But accepting it as his drug is the first step."
mainly because it's actually the 5th step... but it's the first to a much longer journey. that line could go with anything..
you just have a lot of universal quotes and what not.
i loved it ash.
i really did...
and i like you writing from a very serious perspective. but i also like your funny side.. so you're just plain awesome.[/quote
I hate to not think for myself and steal someone else's words, but she said it so well I can't think of anything to add to that. It's an awesome story and it is so well written. Everything's Swell!
