Kiss Me Tenderly - Comments

  • ForeverCursed

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    PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IF YOU CAN!!!
    October 2nd, 2012 at 04:24am
  • Lost.In.Stereo

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    It's sad, but I really like it so far (:
    February 19th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • Forever Young.

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    aww this is so sad :(
    but it's really well written and i'm definitely subscribing :)
    February 19th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • The Color Abi

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    I'm cry at how depressing this is Ellen.
    I'm glad Rian is sticking by them though because they'll need him.
    And I understand why Zack was angry, of course I do but it's depressing.
    The ending was kind of cute though <3
    February 10th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • lovely little lonely

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    I love this Ellen. Even though it's made me all sad now. :( As soon as I read the word 'cancer' I was tempted to close and not read anymore, 'cause well, yeh. Kindahitshomeabit. =/
    But I didn't. And it was wonderfully written, keep it up girlie! :)
    February 7th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • Melly Jelly

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    Oh my God. This is-
    Ellen, so good. <333 I cannot wait to read the rest. Amazing.
    February 6th, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • Zachary Merrick.

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    the tears, Ellen, the tears. ;____;
    oh my god I am not even kidding this is so good already and the way it just moves so heartbreakingly quickly from adoption to cancer just oh my.
    especially since cancer is something close to me it's heartbreaking all the more so and I just can't really form sentences properly at the minute for how much promise this has. it's already amazing. <3
    I'll come back when I'm coherent and less teary, promise.
    February 6th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • The Color Abi

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    I love this start.
    You know instantly that something heartbreaking is up and as this chapter continues, you find out that it's the worst kind of heartbreak. First, you're led to believe that it may have something to do with adoption what with them talking about having a child but then the cancer is struck down hard with the reader and you can feel both Alex and Jack's pain about the matter. It's all a rush and you know that even though they're both angry and upset about it, they'll get through it together... Or so you hope.
    I really can't wait for an update on this because it's amazing, really amazing <3
    February 6th, 2011 at 10:39pm