August 19th, 2011 at 11:15pm
As soon as I saw the title of this, I was immediately attracted to it. I actually have those numbers written on the ceiling of my bedroom; I love Donnie Darko. I must admit that I wasn't a huge fan of the moving image; they just don't do it for me. I loved the summary though; that's one of my favorite quotes.
I really liked how the main characters didn't have a STD; rather that they were doing a project on it. That put an entire new spin on the story and it definitely increased the awkwardness, which you wrote very well. Overall, I thought that this piece was really cute and really adorable but I think that it could have been just a bit longer. I would have loved to seen a bit more of their relationship. Nonetheless, I'm glad I chose to read this; it was so cute. :)
I liked the repetition of the introduction in the end of the story, I think that it just introduced the idea of the awkwardness, then reinforced it after the readers saw it. :) I think it was quite nice. And I liked that there was no threat of the characters having an STD and that the love wasn't because of someone having one - but because it happened from a class project on STD's, I also thought that was pretty neat how it tied in and made sense. :) I think it was written well, it wasn't over the top and it was just nice to read. :)