I was so drawn in by the title of this, I absolutely adore this movie and I've wanted to read the book since i came out. It's such a challenging topic to write a story, so kudos to you for using this as inspiration. I'd be nervous going near something this intense. I loved your use of italics, it separated thought from memory really well and I liked that when you writing his thoughts, the sentences all seemed lost and twisted and it felt as though he were literally saying every thing he thought in perfect order, the train of thought was shoen really well. And I like that the title was I Am Not Andrew Laeddis, but by the end, like in the movie, he has to come to the realisation that he's already lost in his mind and there's not much he can at this point. This was really interesting, there were a couple grammatical errors, like missing commas, but other than that, it was really good. Great job!
January 26th, 2011 at 01:56am