All We Need - Comments

This is a really short piece, but it still holds so much meaning. I just want to turn your writing into a stuffed bear and hold him all night long. I want to keep your writing close.

I love the concept of this piece. That when you're in love, nothing else matters. Just the fact that you're next to each other and your mate is happy. She seems content that her lover is happy with a movie, so she doesn't say anything. That speaks a thousand words. It's almost like this piece is a thousand words itself, because it sends such a message across.

I love the way that your portray love. Keep on rocking, Dru!

This drabble was really short but it tells a lot, especially the emotions that the girl felt about her boyfriend. It's almost like a short story about the couple's lives and what was happening. The layout's very simple but great; I just thought that the story and chapter title could be changed to a similar, or exactly the same, colour to the background since it kind of distracts the reader while he/she's reading. Apart from that, this is great, and keep up your good work. :)

dido on that! plus i'm totally subbing and reading more and subbing!!! i like howyou can make them short and still get the message across. plus it's sooo cute!!!! and written from the soul and heart, not the mind. also i didn't see any grammar errors or anything. BRAVO BRAVO!!!! EXTRAODINARY JOB!!!!

For such a small amount of writing I found this Drabble to be be just right. The message is clear and I found myself smiling while reading it. I think I might read some more of your stuff.

Drabble. Written as Druden.