She Is Love - Comments

you should update! i miss this story! D:

Hey! Doe's having some fun! Huzzah!

A small constructive word: watch what you're writing. Consistency throughout the chapter should be kept (like, if Rhys calls Eli her boyfriend keep it as her saying boyfriend. Same goes for fiancé.)

But that proposal scene was the most adorable - yet cheesy - ending! Personally, I am not a fan of cheese, but that was just so sweet not to love! And with Rhys in the background it makes it more quirky than cheesy. Sometimes special moments like that just have to be cheesy to be good.

Keep writing and I can't wait to see what you write in the next chapter!

Awwwwwww! So cute!
I actually love this story!

and my suggestion is JORDAN STAAL!! or Kris Letang!

That was very bittersweet - love this so far. Would love the chapters to be a bit longer, but that's only cause I can't get enough - update soon!

That was cute in a sad way. :P
I like the fact that we're learning more about her fiance.
Write more soon!

I really like this so far :)
Update soon!

Haha! I quite enjoyed Doe's reaction to the accents. I'm quite glad Rhys took her out. She was rotting inside and out by just waiting by Eli's bedside. But it just shows how true her heart is (at least, as far as she knew).

The tension creation was actually quite nice. Yeah, you'd rather it not be there, but that's reality for you, eh?

I wonder what Talbot is up to in that mind of his, though. And what's with this demeanour between Rhys and him? I enjoy how you wrote a short chapter but raised a good bit of questions leading to the rest of the story. Just keeps the reader in!

Keep updating, no matter how long or short!

I am hooked! This is a great story so far, flawless. I subscribed! Update soon! :)

I told you I would come and read your other stories and let me tell you that this did not disappoint in any way, shape or form

So, I can't express how much I love this story already. Doe is just lovable. You can't help but love her for her devotion to her fiance and for seeing what she is going through because of the whole incident. And Rhys seems pretty awesome too. :D I don't know what it is about her (maybe its the fact that she dragged Doe out of the hospital in order to get her to see the world and light of day or seeing how sorry and sympathetic she was when the guys brought up Eli at dinner) but she is just an awesome character.

I can't wait to see how this story plays out. You already know that I'm going to be subscribing to this once I submit this comment. I can't tell you how interested and excited I am to see the direction that you take this in.

I know you wont disappoint. :)

I love this! I can't wait to see how she meets Max. What a horrible situation for Doe to be in! Can't wait for an update!

'Rhys' is Irish ain't it? Like, John Rhys Meyers (sexy beast)?

I love her dedication and love for Eli. She's such a lovely person (I'm sure she has her flaws) for being so dedicated, but such dedication can be unhealthy. I'm glad she's finally getting out on the town because I wouldn't want to see her cooped up in that hospital forever! Plus, you never know what might happen in places where you aren't normally at.

I would love to see more artsy description in your stories to develop the story some more. It's great as is, but it could be amazing. But don't overload on the description!

I can't wait to see what happens when she gets out of the hospital! Who knows what will happen!

Okay, I know your prize wasn't to comment, but I have this thing that I have to comment once I read it. But this is going to be simple and quick.

I'm hooked. There seems to be a lot of story behind, around, and ahead of this whole situation that Eli and Doe got themselves in. And what does this person that she meets (that you mentioned in the summary) do to change her life so much? Does Eli come out of the coma? I would really like to see where you take this because it has so many possibilities.