Pure Perfection - Comments

  • adam driver.

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    oh, my lanta. write more? please?
    February 1st, 2012 at 07:52pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    that was very very hot
    March 8th, 2011 at 09:32pm
  • angy_something

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    i fucking loved it its soooooooooo hot
    February 8th, 2011 at 12:11am
  • Zacky's Beotch

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    Hot Mother Fucking Jesus Fucking Damnnnnnnn O.o that was amazing Whitney!!!
    February 7th, 2011 at 01:10am
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    Could you make that into a whole story please? That was too damn hot to just leave us readers hanging like that haha
    February 6th, 2011 at 07:43am
  • regg21

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    That was AMAZING! I would love if it became a whole storyyy :)
    February 3rd, 2011 at 04:01am
  • ellievengeance

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    I need a cold shower now...
    DAYUM!
    February 1st, 2011 at 11:01pm
  • bloodravyn

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    i KNOW you said a one shot, but PLEASE write more of this sexy slash?!
    February 1st, 2011 at 12:01pm
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Damn it, that was fo fucking HOT! (I swore that I would stop reading slash but damn it, it's sooo...) This was just a fucking mazing!!!!!! Brilliant for your first ;)
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Um holy crap that was really hot! And seriously that was pretty awesome for it being your first slash! You should TOTALLY write more a7x slash...please?!
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:55am
  • Beastly Shadows.

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    Also, I meant line, not night. XD
    Sorry... I'm a bit tired right now... oh well. :'D
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:18am
  • Beastly Shadows.

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    Okay, so, first of all I love your style of writing, it's awesome. :)
    And second of all I think you have done a fantastic job of making me love my favorite Avenged Sevenfold slash pairing even more. Just fucking amazing.
    The sex, by the way, well to put it bluntly... it made me want to have sex... and sure that happens half of the time when I read stories where Zack and Matt do that, but honestly they were nothing compared to how badly I want it right now because of this damn story. XD Just sayin'.
    But okay, so this was my favorite paragraph... because it was so fucking hot:
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    "Do you even realize what you've done to me, Matt?" He hissed, against the skin on my throat, "I always watch you walk out of the room with a hard on," He kissed my skin, and then blew on it, "Sometimes on stage you get them too, and I know you can't do anything about them in that very moment," He said, kissing below my ear, "I have to fight myself not to suck you off on stage."
    The last night... for the love of God woman! I swear, just visualizing Zack sucking him off on stage, fuck that was indescribably good! <3
    I think I'm just in love with you. XD
    You're wonderful. :)

    xoxx ~suicidal memories;
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • D. Dixon

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    Oh good lord. That was hot. *fans self* And so freaking amazing. I loved it! :D
    January 29th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • sedated nights;

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    O.o Oh. My. Fucking. God. I'm sorry, but you don't know how long I've wondered if you'd ever write a slash pairing between two of the guys. I enjoy reading your stories, and I always wondered how you'd write a slash. I was honestly so ecstatic I couldn't even concentrate on the whole story the first time I read it. And to top it all off, it was amazing. Great job!
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • paper skeletons.

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    WHOOOAAAA!

    The only smut I've ever bothered finishing.

    Take that as a compliment.

    :)
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • fictionkitten

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    SO FREAKIN HOT :O
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:28am