Feline Heaven - Comments

Oh, how cute. This was definitely different, and I could really tell that you did your research on felines. The only criticism I have is that you switch from past tense to present tense and back throughout the story, where you should probably just try to stick with one or the other. But otherwise, nice job! (:

Ooh, this was incredibly good(:
Obviously, I had my own little idea for each of the pictures & traits.
Nothing like this was in my mind! Amazing, and >>This.Useless.Heart.<< already seemed to have pointed out the only few mistakes I spotted throughout the whole story. Your incorporation of the three traits was also visible, and I was unsure if you'd even understand the word exacting~
Oh, the power of Google & online dictionaries. How naive of me ^^
Any way, as I previously stated, amazing. You did wonderfully.

Aw, this is so cute. I love how attatched Christopher gets to the little margay kitt and how he brings Grace out of her shell. You did a pretty good job of working in all the elements of the contest, and I love your layout. (I don't often comment on layouts, but I really liked the simplicity of this one not to mention the adorable margay. :3 )
Not too many errors:
Without a word to Dr. Reed I turn and enter the building, knowing that he’ll fallow. Moving around the spacious waiting room, I head to the clinic. When constructing this place I had the architect put a clinic in every building, that way no matter where an animal got sick or hurt I didn’t have far to transport it. - a comma is needed after "Dr. Reed in the first sentence and "fallow" should be "follow". Also the third sentence is a run-on, I would place a semi-colon after building, but if you'd prefer you could use a period and make the next phrase a sentence of its own since it is a complete thought.
He opened his mouth to say something else when the machine dinged, signalizing that it was done- "signalizing" should be "signalling". At least, I don't think "signalizing" is a word. >.>

Keep up the good work. :)

This is such a cute story. I love the big cats so Mama is so my fav. in the story. Rey isn't bad either. hahaha. =) The story flows really well too.