Life is Beautiful - Comments

OHMYGOD CUPCAKKESSS!!! :OOO
Lol sowwy, I like cupcakes :3 But yussss, your story is enough of a gift. (:

They're both nosy and intrusive... It's kind of hard for me to choose a side, but I'm kinda leaning towards Ross, y'know? Like, Jason is funny and all. Then there's Ross, who doesn't really let on that much about himself, but it gives off that interesting mysterious air..? I think I just confused myself with my own words. -_-'
Sooo, what's up with Ross and Christie? They're kinda.. -ahem- Suspiiiiiiciouuuuuuus. :o

Anywhoo, Lovely update, darlinn'. <3

On chapter three. Really good so far. (:

Aww, darling. You forgot to add yourself in the bestest people in the world list. (:
And I like the layout you have, for now I mean. Haha :P
Camille is indeed so very adorable. ;) Hmm. So let me get this straight: Jason is drawn to Camille, who is drawn to Ross, who in turn is also (but unknowingly) drawn to Camille... Did I get that right?! Whatta cycle! :o haha!
"My eyes traced the blond as he sauntered after his friend, heat boiling under my cheeks as I took a slow, dazed bite of my chicken salad." For some reason, this line made me laugh.. I don't know maybe because I just imagined a girl slowly chewing some salad and staring longingly at a guy walking away lol... Am I the only one who found that slightly funny..? D: Oh well.
LOVELY UPDATE<3
Don't stop.. Believin'.. HOLD ON TO THE FEEELINNGG.
Sorry Journey got me there bahaha . But don't stop, my dear. Keep up the wonderful work<3

Normally I'd read the first few parts so I understand what's going on, but when you said to read the chapter titled "Doctor, Doctor" I decided to see how it would go if I didn't do that for a change. And I have to say, wow! Somehow without reading the previous 11 chapters I was able to understand almost everything that was going on. You didn't even have to outright state that Camille has TB because I Googled the drugs mentioned and that's what popped up. You've managed to encompass the entire plot in an update, which is something that I find really hard to do (not just for myself but for others), so bravo!

My guess was they were chatting about taking me off Isoniazid and switching it with either Rifampin or Pyrazinamide, but for all I was aware they could be talking about the massive zit between my eyebrows.
I dunno why but I really liked this line. I liked how it got specific with the drug names and then switched to a sort of dry humor with the mention of the zit. It showed her maturity and yet reminded us that she's still a teenager and has to deal with regular teen problems as well.

The only error I could find was: It had been bugging me for the passed day or two but he never gave me a chance to ask him. The word in bold should be "past." :)

You've done a wonderful job here and I love your writing and the way you portray Camille (I like her a lot). I'll actually probably go back and reread the first 11 chapters so I know exactly what's going on, haha. Great job! :)

This was great, I can't seem to find anything wrong with it. Sorry I can't give you the criticism you were looking for, but praise is always a good thing isn't it? Your layout was nice and easy to read. Your story kept me focused and nothing detracted from the chapter. (I was reading chapter 12). This was really cute and sad. You've got quite a way with words. This line was my favorite:

As heat grew behind my eyes, I willed the memory away and took in this new one, but not replacing it. Such a memory never could be.

It makes me think of things that are going on with me right now and I can relate to how she feels in this line. Your imagery and descriptions were amazing. Keep up the good work!

First, the layout is amazing. It matches with everything exquisitely. Second, I love the detail. I love thay there are no grammer errors (at least none that I could spot hahaa :) Third, I love how Camille is so strong in the current situation. The detail, the layout, the everything is absolutely amazing. I'm going to go subscribe now :)

This is flawless. I know you said you wanted a critique, but I honestly couldn't find anything wrong with this. Your grammar and spelling was impeccable and brilliant. The plot is so smooth and flows perfectly - it's sad, yes, but genius, also. You've done a fantastic job with this so far and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't horribly impressed!

Prologue:
Really nice. The details in the first paragraph were really amazing. I never read a story about this disease, so this is all new to me. Anyways, I can already feel for Camille, which is always good when you're reading a story like this.

Chapter 1:
First part of the chapter = heartbreaking. I can't imagine an eight year old going through that, it must be horrible. I don't know a lot about tuberculosis, but if it were that contagious would the school still let her go there?

I liked the second part, not much happened but now we know the relationship between the parents and Camille. I'm kind of glad that they get along, and it's not just another story where the protagonist hates her family.

Chapter 3:
Aw, I feel bad for her. D: Embarrassed on her first day, that must be hell. Anyways, I like Ross he seems pretty down to heart although a bit cocky. And Jason well he just seems like the regular boy, ya know?

I don't have much to say for this chapter, but I liked it. (:

Chapter 4: I'm so glad she made a friend. (: The new character seems nice, not overly friendly which I hate. Anyways, I just wanted to say that your writing is absolutely stunning. <3 The only critic I have is sometimes I wished you put more details when your describing the imagery.

Chapter 5: I swear your writing is addicting, I just want to keep on reading it. :D

So, I'm going to take a shot here and say that the 'group' Ross hangs out with are kind of popular? (;
Aha, and I also really like how she can piano. (:

Chapter 6: I'm running out of things to say. xD There are just so many times when I can tell you how much your writing is beautiful. (: Anyways, I like how Camille doesn't make a huge deal out of it. She doesn't want anybody to know, she just want to be normal. I love that about her. I also want to learn more about Jason, he seems like a very interesting character. (:

Chapter 7: I like Jason. xD Aha, he seems like the guy I'd like to hang out with. Ross also, but he seems more the silent badass type.

Even though I've only commented on these chapters, I'll definitely keep reading this story cause it's really amazing. <333 Great job, I love this.

This is really amazing. The summary was a bit bland for me, but that's just a personal preference. I honestly find it really hard to criticize this, it's just so amazing.

I really like this, and the descriptions and the way in which you worded everything was brilliant. The only thing that was a little odd for me were the last few lines, but they were still very good. I'm really excited to see what happens to Camille, so I think I will be subscribing. This is a really original idea, and it is truly like a breath of fresh air because of how brilliantly it is written. Keep up the good work.

Okay, well you wanted some constructive criticism. I find it really difficult to say something negative about this piece, without nit-picking at small details. That says something.

I do believe that this is extremely well-written. I'm not quite sure what the previous commenter meant when they mentioned that this wasn't interesting. I find the plot extremely intriguing and I will be back to read more.

Maybe a few things you could change would be to change the whispers from italics in the paragraphs, to quotations. It was a little confusing. There are also just a few punctuation mistakes along with grammar, but it really isn't anything too big to worry about.

Sorry if this wasn't harsh enough, but I honetly couldn't find any major issues. I plan on subscribing and sticking with this story.

Piece of advice: Sometimes people just want to say negative things, even if what they are saying isn't true. Some commenters just want to throw their two cents in. Other times, some people are extremely bothered by tiny details. I'm not that way, so maybe I'm not the biggest help;)

Hope that helps, I really enjoy this story:)

I have to say the story is pretty simple but the good simple that I love. The it gorgeous by the way. To me in some parts my mind wasn't all into it and started to drift off, but it is a good concept for a story. 4/5

Aww how cute -> "flirty-flirty" xD lol
He doesn't like her..?
BULLSH- err... (:
THAT, my dear friend Ross, what you felt, was utter jealousy. That is all. ;)
But again, brilliant details. I love your writing. <3
I'll be waiting for the next lovely update, love. (:

The prologue is so sad. :( And so well done that it's wonderful.

Everything was so well put together! The words the descriptions it flawlessly travelled from the beginning of a scene to the end describing everything that occurred and what was left in its wake. So beautiful.

I'm in love, doll.

Okay, so first of all, I want to apologize for not getting back to you sooner; and I also want to thank you for the massive, lovely comment that you left me (: I really, really appreciate it <3 Anyways, onto the review. I love this optimistic stories; it makes me feel so nice reading them. I love how you start off the prologue. I felt so awful for Camille :( Tuberculosis is such a terrible disease. It ruins families and it's just a slow suicide. It's awful. In the first chapter, I felt even worse for her. Her friends just upped and left her? Wtf, that's so cruel! I hated the kids who started talking about her behind her back; that's absolutely terrible. I just want to reach inside the story and give that poor little girl a hug :/ Anyways, this story completely captured my heart. It's heartwarming, but sad, optimistic, but courageous. It's amazing. I'm subbing :D Lovely job! <3

Ooof. Her schedule sounds horrible. :x Someone needs some relaxation.
Bahaha that would've had to have been one damn good smoothie to get me out of doing nothing!
Wonderful details and I love how Jason just popped outa nowhere xD
Waiting for the next updates to come<3 :D

I love this story. I love Jason. And Chrisse. And Camille. And everyone else. That is all.

Now I am sad! The only reason is because I was subscribed to this but was not getting the notifications that it was updated. I am glad that I got to read more. I still absolutely love this story. I felt so bad for her on her first day to that private school. I could not imagine going through something like that. Absolutely love this STILL :) More soon!

I love the new layout :3 It's very prettty.
I am absolutely confused as to what is up with Chrissie. Hopefully my stupid brain will process it soon. Unless, that is, you tell me? :D lol
Chrissie is.. interesting. Yeah, because I have no idea what hell is different about her, I guess that's the only thing I really can say (:

Beautiful update, as usual.<3 Keep it up, dear. (:

This is really, really good!

I chose this one as I adore the Vega 4 song - it's absolutely gorgeous, and I love the idea - it's so original and interesting!

You drew me in straight from your gorgeous prologue. I love the contrast between Camille and the other children. It's so heartbreakingly beautiful to imagine, and you can't not feel sympathy for her.

I love Camille in general as a character. Despite being so "unnatural", she still seems to be so normal. I can relate to her very well and understand her feelings and situations.

I also like the alternations between the points of view. It gives you the oppourtunity to see both sides of Camille and Ross' story and you make sure that you take the time to develop each character over every chapter so that I feel like I understand them even more after reading each scene between them, each of their thoughts and feelings at different times. It's a great idea, and works very well!

I love it!

AAHHH!! I'm sorry D: I haven't commented in a while and I feel absolutely horrible ):
But, I love the story so far. I do think the possibilities are endless as to who she could end up with. Like, she could end up with Jason because he looks like he's willing to understand. Ross too, though he doesn't show it... I don't know; just a thought ;) I love how completely understanding Andrea is when she doesn't question Camille. She doesn't seem like the type to pry, ya know? (:
Well,,, UPDATE SOON, MY DEAR!<3 Keep 'em comingg! :D