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First off, the layout was nice. I didn't have too much of a hard time reading it.
You followed the story of Snow White pretty well, while making it modern.
The only things I have to say was that sometimes you seemed to put in a phrase that didn't belong there or just stuck out. But that's about it.
Good job. (:
March 12th, 2011 at 01:45am
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You followed the story of Snow White pretty well, while making it modern.
The only things I have to say was that sometimes you seemed to put in a phrase that didn't belong there or just stuck out. But that's about it.
Good job. (: