Eclat - Comments

keep up the good work, loving it! xx

Your connection to the loss of someone you loved muck like Dollie really added to the emotion and talent in this chapter i can't wait for the next. However i really believe Christofer is being a fool.

She should be with Christofer But i flippin love this story you have a very awesome and unique writing style. This story is beautiful :)

ilove this story so much :D
i'm actually kinda glad dollie is 'with' carter, it gets back at mcslutty drew ingle. c;

You neeeed to update (:

Please please please .
I love this story too much for it to end.

So, I finally read all of Smirt, and I just read all these eight chapters, and I swear if you don't update soon you're gonna be hit in the face.

Well, maybe not aha, but still.

<3

BLAH. I'm soo in love with this write. It's so fucking good. I absolutely adore your style. :]

I understand why she likes Carter, I mean Chris did the same to her in a way when Ellie came back into the picture. I'm they will make it through though lol!

sooooo like i love this storyyy!
but im sad because theres not a lot of love going on between dolllll and chris:( liek they kissed and is that ittt??? im confuseddd :(

update soon love youuuu
love this storyyyy
xxx keep writing ur amazing:)
p.s. i love smileys:)

Ooh, this is getting really good. Seems like there is going to be a lot of drama in this one! Hopefully you get some more updates soon, because I love this one. Keep up the good work!

Oh dear. What was that? Denial? psh. Chris is in denial, Ellie is in some desperate impress-him-to-get-him state, Kara is being a loser (jk! <3), and Dahlia is being a pussy. The tension between them is so obvious, but Chris is just like, oh gimme those pancakes. What?
Lol, I can tell something big is going to happen :D loved the chapter!

yay!!!! you do not know how happy I am that I started going back on Mibba just to find my dear Rianne posted the sequel!!! ;D

<3 <3 <3

Cant wait until the next chapter (:

Hnnnngggg this is so great.
You should really really really really update this.

Ahhh, this is so good! Are you serious you only have one chapter in it? I was all excited. Gosh, now you just HAVE to update. Please? Pretty please? I`ll love you forever (:

“I know you’re not sleeping,” she whispered, her warm breath caressing my ear.
I shivered, and it wasn’t because of the frigid surface of the wall I was leaning on. “Go to sleep, Ellie. It’s a known fact that you’re a total bitch without your eight hours,” I murmured teasingly, one corner of my mouth turning upwards as she pinched my cheek.
Nibbling.

@life of the party; if i could like things on here i would like yours a billion times. :D

This is already lovely, Rianne, buuuuut . . . I hate Ellie. ^__^