Sesame Street: The Satire. - Comments

EPIC

I loved Sesame Street when I was younger(Elmo you sweet thang ;D) and this had me LOLing the whole time xD
I rarely find funny parodies but goodness this is amazing :D

"Ten cookie!" Count von Count announces.

Oscar steals two.

"Eight cookie." Count von Count amends.

Reaching over, Count von Count shoves a cookie in his mouth.

"Seven cookie." He eats another.

"Six cookie." He starts to take another.

"Five coo-" Big Bird slaps him and the cookie crumbles onto the ground.

LMAO XDD

Big Bird is a girl? O.o I had no idea what gender he/she was xD
And it is not easy being yelloe! Amen Big Bird :D

This was so funny, aha. <33

Cookie Monster flips him off.

I laughed out loud at that one. :) This was lovely, thank you for amusing me so.

It was entertaining, I have a little sister so I watch SS allot and I will never view it the same again. It was odd but in a good way, I liked it more then I thought I would.

This is by far the strangest thing I have read on this site to date. Congratulations!

Could use a another basic proof-read- commas missing here and there, the odd block of dialogue missing a line break- but, overall, well... I don't really have any suggestions, because I'm not sure what to make of this.

I have to admit, this one was a first for me. Never in my life would I have thought I'd see the day when I'd read a Seasame Street parody. I found a few grammar mistakes, such as in one of the first sentences you had a vowel following 'a' when it should have been 'an'. I didn't much care for the way you had the sentences broken up, I don't think there was a single full paragraph. I really liked the Barney joke, but I feel like you should separate that from the previous sentence with a dash rather than a period and a line break. Overall, this had plenty of humor.

Lol, i really like this fan-fic, and i applaud you for being able to turn an innocent childrens story into a this, this, AWSOME ONE SHOT!.

Lol, you should definatally make more like this.

First off: concept = great.
Second: Big Bird = boy. XD

Then:
Whenever you have a piece of dialogue followed by "he/she/they/etc" "said/shouted/cried/asked/etc" the sentence doesn't come to a full stop so the following sentence shouldn't be capitalized. Like:

"Damn fur." He hisses,
- Should be: "Damn fur," he hisses...

Same with this:

"And that was Kermit's song." Cookie Monster calls triumphantly.
- It should be, "... Kermit's song," Cookie Monster Calls...

Overall:

LOVE! I love the Count. Seriously. He's so awesome on the show, and the whole counting thing always freaked me out when I was a kid. So good job, this was funny and you definitely have a way with words. Yeah there were some grammar errors but it's easy to overlook them and they didn't bother me or ruin the flow. So good job girl!

I love this story! It's very funny. Good job!! <3

Hahahaha "It's because I'm yellow isn't it?" <33333 This was epic!

Oh, this is absolutely epic! xD

Really, the way you portrayed the characters was perfect. I had Cookie Monster's voice in my head as I read it. xD And Big Bird and Cookie Monster, man, how did you even come up with that? I don't think I stumbled upon any mistakes grammar or spelling and that's always a good thing. The first few lines really drew me in. Great job!

Count Von Count was my favorite amongst the characters. My favorite part was the 'not one cookie and not no cookies'. And the explanation of fractions. I'm not one to usually read parodies or anything involving comedy but I absolutely loved this. It was probably meant to be like that, but I think the lack of detail was a nice touch. I don't know how to explain it, but it was as though the characters were more alive, perhaps. it brought more attention to them. Overall, it was an amazing story, extremely funny and I do hope you continue it. I would love to read more. xD

I rarely find funny parodies. You definitely had some good lines going on in there. My favorite part was when Big Bird slapped the Count. I actually laughed out loud. Also, when Monster Cookie explained fractions to the Count. Man, that just ripped me apart. XD Perhaps, the only thing I suggest is changing the font and properly separate certain paragraphs that weren't formatted correctly. Other than that? Brilliant. I like your sense of humor.

The layout was simple but did not distract from the rest of the story. I thought this was funny. One of my favorite line was when you referenced Barney. It made me laugh. I also like how Big Bird was a girl instead of a boy -- it added to the humor of the whole story.

My other favorite lines were That was the Grinch's line. and all others that were like this. They were so hilarious! I also like how you kept the characters personality mostly the same as the show. Overall, this story was funny and I really liked it.

I dislike parodies strongly. I never really find them funny and while some things of this were humerous I didn't really laugh out loud at anything. And it's kind of depressing that I totally never knew that Big Bird was a girl...she sounds like a dude. But the joke about Barney--that was good lol. :)

All in all, I admit, I'm not usually one for parodies, never have been. Nevertheless, this did amuse me, aha. Maybe it's because when I was a kid I adored Seseame Street (I used to have this computer game I'd play all day, it was crazy) or maybe it's because it does have some sort of... plot? I suppose.
I liked the "Barney" thing because I remembered my friend telling me that once, except I can't really trust much that kid said because he was prone to "embellishing". Was it real? I guess it's a double conformation now. :D

Oscar just seems like he would be the troll of Sesame Street. It made me feel like he was an evil scientest of some sort, having them as his sort of "children" and them being... like, deformed. Is that weird? It just fits his character so well.

And I loved the Count.... counting everything. It just brought back this rush of nostaligia, which is probably why I enjoyed it so much. HE IS THE BEST VAMP EVER. You can't even deny it. He just counts everything. Even tears. Because that's just how he rolls.
The ending was just awesome in that screwed up way, aha. :D

This was, extremely interesting, really creative.
I love the barney comment, it made me smile and think of the little rhyme 'i love you, you love me, so lets get together and kill barney...'
The blood monster was amusing, he was cute in a weird sor of way.
Alltogether i lliked this alot :]

This was really funny. :D

I loved the Barney reference, and all the other small references in here as well. I also loved the Blood Monster, because didn't they change him to Veggie Monster or something? I don't know, it just made me laugh.

The only thing it, the layout was a bit plain. And also Big Bird is a dude. xD

Great job though, this was hilarious.

oneshot for a oneshot

I'm amused because the characters are actually characters and not caricatures. I mean, it's hilarious but I like that you din't go the way of cheap jokes and cracky one-liners. I love the joke about how Barney got fired. The idea and premise of the Blood Monsters is amusing, how they think blood will make them real. A more macabre Pinnochio, almost.

The thing with the Count and the cookie makes me think of OCD really. And that's amusing to me. And explains a lot.

I love the "Daddy" thing and the Blood Monster crying. It's cute in a sick sort of way.

overall, I'm amused by the whole thing, but I do wish it were properly formatted with double spacing between all paragraphs.