Let's Play a Game Tonight - Comments

  • NovemberRain

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    hey!
    just started reading all your stories - and really liked them so far! ^^

    just one little thing: you do have two "mistakes" in the whiplasher-part of this story! - "Nightmare glared at Whip for a long time before finally moving away from Cat, a happy sigh came from the boy as he no longer could feel the drummer in him." - nightmare as drummer??
    "Instead he moved his hands down to Whip’s zipper, his hands shaking by the pain he still felt after what Bone had done to him." - you mixed up the names, it should be nightmare

    keep on writing! can't wait to read your next story!
    February 15th, 2008 at 01:55pm
  • boychild.

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    Aw, I liked both of these comments *giggles*

    So sweet of you <3 It was really hard to write, it felt.... mean O_o
    February 3rd, 2008 at 02:26pm
  • z3ez

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    That picture of Cat is so adorable. I just wanna cuddle him. ^^

    I still feel like crying everytime I read this. Cry
    February 3rd, 2008 at 09:16am
  • bloodravyn

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    Clap Dance :pat: :arms:
    LOVED IT!!!!!
    February 3rd, 2008 at 03:17am