hey! just started reading all your stories - and really liked them so far! ^^
just one little thing: you do have two "mistakes" in the whiplasher-part of this story! - "Nightmare glared at Whip for a long time before finally moving away from Cat, a happy sigh came from the boy as he no longer could feel the drummer in him." - nightmare as drummer?? "Instead he moved his hands down to Whip’s zipper, his hands shaking by the pain he still felt after what Bone had done to him." - you mixed up the names, it should be nightmare
keep on writing! can't wait to read your next story!
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just started reading all your stories - and really liked them so far! ^^
just one little thing: you do have two "mistakes" in the whiplasher-part of this story! - "Nightmare glared at Whip for a long time before finally moving away from Cat, a happy sigh came from the boy as he no longer could feel the drummer in him." - nightmare as drummer??
"Instead he moved his hands down to Whip’s zipper, his hands shaking by the pain he still felt after what Bone had done to him." - you mixed up the names, it should be nightmare
keep on writing! can't wait to read your next story!