I actually liked this a lot! The layout was nice and simple, pretty. I really loved the fact that the protagonist is a lesbian, I think it is a rare find to stumble upon a story featuring a gay female. I think you did such a wonderful job capturing her voice, as well. The description was nice and flow-y, without being too dry or intense. I liked how it all ended with this edge of something more, and like not everything was lost. I really liked this! Great job. <3
The layout was nice and simple, pretty.
I really loved the fact that the protagonist is a lesbian,
I think it is a rare find to stumble upon a story featuring a gay female.
I think you did such a wonderful job capturing her voice, as well.
The description was nice and flow-y, without being too dry or intense.
I liked how it all ended with this edge of something more,
and like not everything was lost.
I really liked this!
Great job. <3